Reviews of Harry Potter and The Rise of George

Well the story need an editor with urgency. Please! The grammar is so wrong that is hard to catch what are they trying to explain. About the plot and the story development is hard to understand something that you can't due to the need of an editor in the project.

need editor... difficult to read and understand.. but from what I think I understood is good novel idea... but again without editor hard to read

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As mentioned before, this is an already existing story with almost 800 chapters published. https://m.boquge.com/wapbook/35149.html So this is not a fan fiction or an original but a ****ty 'attempt' at translation. Its really bad to pass an already existing novel as an original.

I had waited so long for this, finally a Harry Potter novel. Thank you for this Author! Please, Please, Please do not be discouraged and keep posting. 0/

Finally found a Harry Potter fanfiction ... But it made me confused and cringed ... It's fine but it need some fix.. but I'm thankful for the fiction btw . Keep it up 😊

it may be hard for you to listen to it but knowing english words is not enough, you don't know how to construct a ****** sentence so please give up, cause whoever read this will not understand a thing

His name is George. He is raincarnate to Harry Poter world. He can not use magic he get poition master use luck poiton to streghten his soul, his invented poiton to streghtened his body,...He is use potions to earn a lot of money. He has a maid and granma,...Story was good but dropted!? ):

Ugh the English writing is sooo bad even if there are 44 chapters now I don’t want to read it it makes me feel dumb.Honestly the story might be good but the writing totally sucks.

Can't bloody understand what your saying. ................................................................. ..................................

Jesus.... this is the worst grammar I have ever seen in a novel, the instead of using "I am speaking" 'I am thinking', the author uses "" for everything to the point where you get confused before even reaching the middle of the first chapter. I tried to read until chapter 4, it gets worse, for example. Neville appears, he intruduces himself to harry and the gang and asks if they have seen his toad. Then harry says to neville, "No, I havent seen neville's toad." -facepalm- Unless the author meant that neville's toad was a new species named "neville's toad", then I advice at least reading the bloody chapter that he writes before posting it...

The grammar is terrible..Can't understand the sentences...Better to just read it on its original website m.boquge.com...If have auto Google translate..Then it's way better to understand

First Harry poter came and everyone love it but waching and readingthe same thing again and again is boring so ı am reading storys like this one give me new persfectise. Alot of peopele critisize too much no one is perfect and writing erors can be fixed what is importanat is imagination and creativety! Thanks for story. I hope you can finich all books! (:

For Harry POTTER fan we can not have as much as we want orginal films and storys, but What I like abaut this story is it make me look at this story from different angle. If I were to at MC's shouse ı would do things diferently too! But I am agree with allotof think with writer! I hope he will contunie with stoy to the end!... (:

You are writing the most easy harry potter type novel man and you still write it like this. It would have been difficult if you added some outside elements and I am fed of seeing seeing the nice guy shit so NO.

I was happy to find a Harry Potter fanfiction here, but I was disapointed. Not because of the grammar like many people but because this novel is not an original one. I found out after I read the first sentence. If you are interrested the translated name is "Harry Potter and the rise of an ordinary person" and is on novel updates. As for the one who post this on this site, at least don't say it's an original novel. Thanks.

i put 2 stars mainly cause i cant understand a damn thing, author is a ****wad, if you dont know english , then dont write in english, its that ******, use a language you actually know. ive been looking for good harry potter fanfics, but this is what happens. fucking wonderful.

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When will you make this readable. The grammar is way too bad and the sentences dosent make any sense over half of the time. And you deed someone to proofread and edit your chapters. Otherwise it seems interesting.