Review Detail of DKstarcraft in Harry Potter and The Rise of George

Jesus.... this is the worst grammar I have ever seen in a novel, the instead of using "I am speaking" 'I am thinking', the author uses "" for everything to the point where you get confused before even reaching the middle of the first chapter. I tried to read until chapter 4, it gets worse, for example. Neville appears, he intruduces himself to harry and the gang and asks if they have seen his toad. Then harry says to neville, "No, I havent seen neville's toad." -facepalm- Unless the author meant that neville's toad was a new species named "neville's toad", then I advice at least reading the bloody chapter that he writes before posting it...