I find difficult to believe that in the word of pokemon 1 year is enough to bring a team of 6 to champion level, not to mention that the mc don't even start with 6 pokemon and that means some pokemon have few months to reach that level

Average ff light romance with happy lucky undertone no originality .......................................................................................................................................................................

What the use starting in kanto if you gonna give him others region's pokemon like riolo

Mc had too many pokemon he can't concentrate and focus in a team to train

Who the fk goes to the first date as double date and worst with you twin

Author has no ability to write and can't take negative comments....................... b ...

Dude you don't need to publish your ff if you can't handle negative opinions go write you ff on your personal file and don't make people read such low level writing

I think the autor took a average man and just because he transmigrated he became a genius capable of manipulate and obtaining anything he want easy... classic low level ff

Meh this ff had a very bad start e keep going down... from the beginning talks about love ... has already introduced pokemon from other regions mc didn't show any foreknowledge for a reincarnation

Filler fanfiction

I feel like every chapter is a filler

IF this is original then I must ask where the author learned to write like a translation

Disappointing... the kind of ff that has do many pokemon partners and so many special powers/ cheats that you even forget about half of those

I feel that the mc is weak minded fool... after 10 yrs of prison and being assassinated he don't plays intrigue games at court, plays like a idiot with people that clearly try to fk him up ... is like he forgot the dark side of humanity

Bah if I was the goddess I would send the dude back he asked for way too many things... this became a overpowered fanfic

He is gonna abandon geodude.. that's sad

I don't quite like comments in the middle of the chapter

Let me get this straight... mc is 8 years older than Harry, so hedwig that mc claims he brought stays almost a decade inside a pet shop and no one brought her

What the fk is this fixation with white hair and white skin... where are the manly bronze colored muscled man.... a nice groomed beard

From a pragmatic mc to a BS mc in less than 3 paragraphs