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this..i cant believe it,,,this just makes ur other stories look like ****,,,I dont know what but god damn man, its like someone else wrote it...might be cruel to say this , but focus on this more...this might be one of the best BNHA FF's..one chp and its dope [suggestion: look at the world for what it actually is, not the Hippocratic way, with izukus stupidness...also dont make him a bend over, overly friendly dude. Dont make MC an idiot . Any relationship show build and take **** slow, and if romance, show why the chick is worth it something, dont just like cause she looks good] Really though, this is nice
Ton novel est fuckin great! Merci pour cette entertainment, much love from Canada my friend! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp
Writing Quality: 4 - Very few mistakes that doesn't break the immersion. Pretty good in my opinion. Stability updates: 3 - Middle score here, the series is starting and I cannot form a decent opinion on it. Story Development: 3 - Nice story with decent background, but you will notice the story is being influenced by the comments in the chapter and trying to keep the readers happy is not how you write something. Either they like your work or the do not. A writer NEVER goes around pleasing readers that dislike certain situations on YOUR story. Character Design: 3 - You can feel the characters in the writing format, they are fleshed out and actually you can relate to them, the MC is nicely done and is not robotic. But, as this is heavily based on "Boku no Hero Academia" some aspects that allow us to relate to those characters are because we already read the manga or watched the anime, hence the middle score. I think this Author could have talent in an orignal novel should he choose to write one. World Background: 5 - BNHA world. Remember to read the available chapters to form you own opinion as mine may differ from others.
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