Alex edited it...

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The last part needs editing, I have typed a better alternative for you, Alex. You can check it out or ask Soni to do it.

The story is slow-paced but every action has a reason, every action up until now has been to obtain certain information and knowledge, after all...Mc is also a single individual who is very cautious in nature. You will understand later when I finish writing the Competition arc.

Well, teenagers, I guess...I didn't know how to better portray his mindset...lol

That's what I said to the author, this inconsistency is worth criticising.

Is it really important to choose the bleach world? Maybe you should try so another world like maybe Seven deadly sins, or some novel world even movies are okay.

Much better, though I still hope you edit the previous chapter. While this chapter is well portrayed, the same can't be said about the previous chapter.

"Sometimes I wish I had the power to intrude into another world, the things I could see and feel would have been so amazing. Alas! It is not possible, that is why we find escape in fiction because it is a place where as long as you have imagination, nothing is beyond you." —Legendary Person

I understand the need for character growth but this is not proving that Mc isn't invincible but rather it shows that Mc is a complete idiot contrary to his behavior in the previous chapters. The problem here is that the point you wanted to convey to the readers is poorly portrayed. You could have made him lose normally after all Misty is a gym leader but the decisions made by the Mc are just downright poorly written. This is constructive criticism, take it as you want to. The only reason why I am even bothering myself to list this is that your novel has lots of potentials and your writing style is quite good.

Anyone who had played Firered or Greenleaf will know what to expect, while surely Nidorana is not a bad choice, I don't see any reason for Gan to use her really. First, she has a level disadvantage; second, she doesn't have any long-range attacks; third, she is slow when compared to her opponent. While there is no direct type disadvantage, I don't see how Nidorana can will especially when Staryu can always hide in the water to avoid any direct hits from her.

Release more chapters...lol

Was Gam really able to defeat those trainers before him? Nidorana is poison and ground type if I remember correctly, you could have taught her mudslap or mudbomb to counter thunder or thunder wave. You are going to tackle a gym so you should have planned a proper strategy. Heck! Even rock tomb can slow down Staryu's speed. Plus, knowing that Nidorana doesn't have any long range attacks and is slow when compared to Staryu, why did you even choose her? No offense but this chapter is absolute crap, plot vice.

I will probably join the patron this year once I get my account, I would have finished my current novel by then and would probably write a pokemon or naruto fanfic....lol, maybe I will create my own patron too!

"not", I say that you poisen them all!

Hm...I understand, both I can't do an everyday release because I don't have time to right everyday, but I understand....