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Ferro

Ferro

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2017-05-16 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ferro
    Ferro23d
    Commented

    you are repeating yourself.

    But even as she missed him, Ino couldn't help but feel a sense of pride in her heart. Koushin had entrusted her with his secret technique, and she was determined to make him proud. She knew that he had faith in her abilities, and that thought alone gave her the strength to continue her training, no matter how difficult it may be.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • Ferro
    Ferro24d
    Replied to TheFanficGod

    Pedo author? wow....

    Ino's eyes would occasionally linger on mine, and her smile seemed to grow brighter whenever our gazes met. We danced around each other, neither one of us quite willing to admit our feelings openly. It was a game we both enjoyed playing, each of us carefully testing the waters, seeing how far we could push before retreating back into the safety of our casual friendship.
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    Koushin: Konoha's Dragonborn[Completed]
    Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod
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  • Ferro
    Ferro1mth
    Commented

    Nice decision. If a little abrupt but really good development. good job imo

    AN: The author noticed that the system made a lot of mistakes, so he decided to eliminate this cancer for the betterment of the plot.
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    Pokemon Earth's Parallel World: Dragon Trainer
    Anime & Comics · iceclaw9113
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  • Ferro
    Ferro1mth
    Commented

    Dialog is kinda dumb. Is this AI? My dude, the attack already happened what do you mean? It's already war.

    "Is the Raikage intent on starting a full-blown war between our villages?" Hiruzen's words echoed through the clearing, each syllable carrying the weight of responsibility and concern. The forest seemed to hush in anticipation, awaiting Dodai's response.
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    Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence
    Anime & Comics · Silent_stiele
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  • Ferro
    Ferro4mth
    Commented

    Are you nerfing the guy? Ichigo without the Zone should be able to smoke this guys. At least that is what you led me to believe in all these chapter up to now. ALSO he has Midorima on his team, I'm afraid this doesn't make any sense to me Author.

    Ch 42 Chapter 41
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    KnB: Template System
    Anime & Comics · sixT9
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  • Ferro
    Ferro4mth
    Commented

    What hate exactly? Neither Saiken nor Chomei had done soemthing to warrant hate from Uzu

    "Although I would try to control the hate towards you by the shinobi but I can't do anything about the hate you will get from the civilians since they mostly won't understand what a jinchuriki is and their significance to our village. They would likely consider you as a monster."
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    Naruto : The Demon Swordsman
    Anime & Comics · Charizard6
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  • Ferro
    Ferro5mth
    Replied to Goutham_Cp

    Legend of the Seeker. Books are good after you watch the series.

    Jasmine, who ranked just below Cain and Xander in the previous test, entered the plaza with her own following of over twenty people, most of them young women, and took up position on the northern side. A few young men trailed behind her, but they appeared to be low in status, being scolded by the girls.
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    Pokemon: Chronicles of Darkness
    Anime & Comics · Jeezu
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 185 Chapter 185: Adzuki
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    Saving the Uchiha by Starting with the Destruction of the Leaf
    Anime & Comics · Read_and_Chill
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Replied to UnderChain

    That series was so good though.... Read the books, they are also good.

    Jasmine, who ranked just below Cain and Xander in the previous test, entered the plaza with her own following of over twenty people, most of them young women, and took up position on the northern side. A few young men trailed behind her, but they appeared to be low in status, being scolded by the girls.
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    Pokemon: Chronicles of Darkness
    Anime & Comics · Jeezu
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Replied to _VoidSlayer_

    Started reading that but the MTL got too heavy for me, I don't even understand some chapters due to that.

    "Murkrow, I swear to you, in this life I shall never abandon you," the boy vowed, and the creature seemed to sense the determination in his voice, for it let out another cry, "Caw!"
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    Pokemon: Chronicles of Darkness
    Anime & Comics · Jeezu
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    still posting this my dude? I always wanted to read this.

    Ch 158 Chapter 158:
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    Pokemon: Chronicles of Darkness
    Anime & Comics · Jeezu
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    I'm pretty sure is Jon

    "Aoto I have something to ask." John suddenly placed the rice bowl on the table and asked.
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    The Shopkeeper of Konoha
    Anime & Comics · thelightedghost
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    Good dialogue. But these 191 chapters feel like a prelude (prologue) to something bigger, at least to me, the sheer power scale does up my expectations of the future conflict. So in theory, judging by the pace of this fic, this should be 500+chapters with some original apocalyptic/cataclismic events coming. Something like the Horde from WoW invading or the like. Imagine, Don't fear to turn into a crossover if you like my dude. You have grown as an Author since I've started following you, amazing job!

    Ch 191 First Men & Andals (Part I)
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    Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)
    TV · Duncan_Randar
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    In my mind she said "Hittokiri Battousai"

    "Katori Batsu'unsai. But I like to go by Batsu."
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    Bleach: From You to Me
    Anime & Comics · AKD_Khmer
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Posted

    133 members, 716 posts, €1,118/month (stats on the p4tr30n) So, let me get this straight. You are milking a world that is not yours, and unique drawings of pokemon that based on an idea that is also not yours and you still do not share them on your first tier of p4tr30n (3$ a month, I checked). How greedy can you be? At this point just go with an original book of your own instead of doing this because it makes you seem like a scummy writer. I was actually interested in supporting you if that was a symbolic gesture, but when I saw your page you are actually making 1k a month out of a world that is not yours, so clearly you do not have the fan-fic spirit in mind when you do this. The fanfic is super solid and I recommend to read it, but not support it with $ in any way. The actual problem is that ppl actually play for this.... meh. Good fanfic though.

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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    megaevo being permanent would be huge. Gigantamax+Resolve would be god tier no? kinda broken

    A/N: I want to ask how much you are loving the story? If there are any interesting thing that you want me to include, feel free to say it.
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    Pokemon - A real story
    Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    Dang, some korean connection speed right there.

    Shedinja then used 'Gravity' on Charizard. It didn't have much of an effect on him, but Charizard was affected a bit, its movements had some nanoseconds of time lag.
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    Pokemon - A real story
    Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    Why do you not fix the "Hagaromo" typo to "Hagoromo"?

    Ch 35 Chapter 33 Meeting The 7 Tails
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    Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    Isn't it "Hagoromo"? I'm starting to get tilted everytime I read this. Asuming I'm right of course. In the event I'm wrong and you really meant "Hagaromo" could you explain to me what a "Hagaromo" is and its backstory and all that?

    Once things calmed down Gramps looked toward Hiro "Well Akashi I believe it's time you introduce the Hagaromo clan to us"
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    Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • Ferro
    Ferro6mth
    Commented

    public opinion should be negative, civilians don't have the same perspective as the goverment. 2/10

    My grandfather Ashina also announced to the villages that we will start selling seals and scrolls to other villages from now on and not just to Konoha. Everyone in the village was surprised but no one protested especially since most people are aware that they abandoned us when we needed them most.
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    Naruto: Rise Of The Uzumaki
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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