Cddizzym
So far it seems it has potential it would need a really big mess to make it bad, I think its inspired in dominions 5 and I hope it doesn't have a pussy protagonist and so far I have been happy with the MC the writing is ok, sorry for bad review English is not my fist language but the message is that the novel is good and you should give it a shot
esse romance bem criativo deixando um MC foda,mais sem atrapalha a história deixando uma vontade de ler deixando agarrado a história,fazendo vc querendo saber o que vai aconteser bem formulado,história interessante com grande potencial bem feito sem discórdias nas palavras até agora que lembre inexistente erro de gramática,vc sabendo casa fala e ação de personagem ser confundi
The constant jump between characters and the story breaks immersion a lot. Reader is under the impression of being infodumped as many random characters are introduced while MC is sidetracked. The novel had a good premise and could proceed smoothly. But author decided to pay more attention to side characters more than the story and mc itself.
This story is one the few lit-rpg that captivated me. 'Sigh' This website has been getting full of ****ty novels whith no character depth or world building. Even the idea is interesting , well I will follow this and hope tosee the little village into a bustling empire and watch the creator regain his rightfull throne .