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Review Detail of Gellus in God is a Game Designer

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Gellus
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For a first attempt at writing, it's ok. Remember in writing, it's show; not tell. The language is a bit strange, and the flow of the story starts and stops a lot. So far the mc just swears at every thing, or screams at everything.

God is a Game Designer

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