Gabuji
Awesome. Work from Sci-fi genre always get my hopes high and after reading this work, I can say it has not disappointed me. The dialogs, the scenes and the settings are precisely written with a good cover page. And it is a good thing that author already told in synopsis what the readers are going to dive in. The only advise I'll like to give is to update it more frequently. Apart from that everything is well and good.
Third Review! Idk if I should do that but why not! This book kinda intrigues me as it is written like a movie script. Of course, that doesn't mean it is bad. In fact, the ideas are great. I could get the feeling of plot and there are times when the script-styled writing turns into more of a narrative-style writing. However, this may confuse some readers at first due to the sudden major change in style. To be honest, that's all the flaws. The rest is just great!
First review! This story certainly has a unique style. Reading it was almost like reading a screenplay. It is very dialogue heavy, but the dialogue is great and really helps to convey and differentiate each of the main characters. The story is an intriguing one - the protagonist and his colleagues flee their home planet during an invasion and end up on earth. I'm predicting some action-packed adventure later on as this story progresses. Enjoyable and very funny.