Reviews of Fractured Void: Twin Stars
Fractured Void: Twin Stars
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
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- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
So far, the novel has been a blast. The MC and his little waifu are so cute and a lot of hidden plots have been hinted already The only problem is the problem with the dialogue punctuations. Good Job author
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okay. so writing quality is pretty good. grammar is on point and it does not feel rushed. author used good proportions of dialogue vs world building. feels like it's being written by a pro. Mc ain't a beta cuck(so far). FML is pretty cute. stability is too early to comment on. hasn't explained much about world background, but uts only th first 15 chapters so there is still time. all in all, pretty good so far and I hope author keeps this up. I'm looking forward to the next update. only question I have is where is Xia twin? the other girl. I really want MC to travel with them both.
