Reviews of Fire Emblem: A Champion’s Journey
Fire Emblem: A Champion’s Journey
PassiveParagon
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Right off the bat.. There are not many Fire Emblem Fics on WN and cuz of that it's 𝘢𝘭𝘮𝘰𝘴𝘵 instant 5 stars from me. Not to mention the MC has no knowledge about the world so every choice he makes will be unpredicted and not always the best, which is a good thing. I don't like writing much so I will end it here but for those who are worried about the grammar.... 𝗗𝗼𝗻'𝘁 𝗪𝗼𝗿𝗿𝘆... Grammar is great.
Just from the title and world the MC is going to. I'm giving this a 5 star. ..... Okay, plus Lyndis's pic, can't deny it helped. Fire emblem has been a dear thing for me. Literally one of my very first 5 turn base RPG type games I've known since childhood. And based on what's shown so far. This is gonna be taking place in the Blazing Sword series. I'm already hyped for all the twists and events that will take place, I just hope dragon Priestess waifu isn't gonna get killed again like in the original
So far only one chap so not much to say. Writing looks promising, Grammar is good, there are not many Fire Emblem fics and I am liking how MC thinks so far. I'm giving it a 5 stars in hopes that it will keep going smoothly and I like it (what other reason is needed). Looking forward to see more and more of how this continues. Nice work Author.
Well, Grammar is very good, especially if you look at the average here on WN. Not many Fire Emblem fics so it should be interesting. Mc doesn't have knowledge of the story so the interaction between characters should be more genuine. The premise if the story seems very interesting and im excited for how it will progress.
nice idea...hope you continue writing this...and make everyone, characters in the party have a happy ending...i played and finished the game in lyndis route in the past 13-14 years during my school days, i got a mix feeling during it's epilogue, cuz some of the characters died or got unsatisfying ending hope, they got a nice ending in your story... good luck and have an enjoyable writing of your story.
Finally a good Fire emblem fanfic. MC= One of those real like MCs that doesn't treat the new world as an exp farm and had managed to accept his new life by honoring his old life. He also acts as his age which is super rare. World= Fire emblem. But of course not turn based, weapons are good if the fighter is good, and no irritating tile limits. Medieval Fantasy as it should be. Plot= He's not there to save the world, he's there to prevent it from happening. (Like Ryze from LOL) The current chapter is all about him adjusting his new life and making the best out of it. Only thing that irks me would be too much monologs. But of course in order not to go insane in a new world who wouldn't do that?
