Reviews of Fate/Defiance

I have been with this story for a while now and it has potential to become a top ten fanfic on this site. Maybe a top 5. If you keep this progress you will definitely do it!

Good story, been entertained the entire way. You post on a consistent schedule even if it's generally once a week, but the quality hasn't dipped. Enjoying the character and the progression of the story. Fate Greek ERA has a lot of opportunities for some interesting world building. I look forward to more, keep up the good work.

10/10 one of the fate fics ever, not kidding but this deserves to be on the top, legit the best fate fic since annihilation maker and the author is an absolute mad lad for making the coolest posters for the fic

This is honestly one of the really good fanfics of this site, though I heard that the author also uploaded this on FF which is not surprising because you can find a lot of better fics in there than in this site. Writing Quality: Pretty decent grammar with a handful of typos here and there. The story is also extremely smooth too! Story Development: Not a lot of chapters out but honestly it was a really enjoyable read so far! Waiting to see how the future chapters will turn out. Character Design: No Gary Stus, check. Characters that feel really humane, check. Staying true to the lore of the mythology while taking a spin on them like most other Nasuverse characters, check. Updating Stability: No comment 'cause I'm really sh*tty at it myself, so I'm not to judge others. XD World Background: You can honestly tell that the author put a lot of work to mash Greek mythology with Nasuverse lore as much as they could and it's really obvious they did a lot of research to do so. This is my review on this story that would eventually be on the top 5 charts of the fanfic category later on. Seriously, don't drop this!

Honestly, I consider myself an avid fanfic reader and have scoured every site imaginable looking for a pretty solid oc/si fic that wasn’t about shirou. To my absolute delight , I ended up coming across this fic. To be straight up, this story is one of the best fanfics out there! (Fate) The fact that it actually incorporates mystery correctly is amazing ! And don’t get me started on the AOTG(age of the gods) time period! Truly original, and very well thought out writing, while I would love for longer chapters, I’m okay as long as they keep coming ! - not sure if reviews are publicly seen or not seeing as I am pretty new to all of this- but if it is then- For all of y’all looking for a solid 10/10 fate fic, that isn’t about shirou/ or an overly strong op/ or even harem based. Then this is your guy right here! (Haha~ in my opinion, I love op characters as long as it’s in a way where they earned the power you know? Seeing a character grow from low level to high levels is always a treat in my opinion) (Also I love that it takes place during the aotg’s, makes it super interesting because you don’t know what’s going to happen next!) Anyways, peace!

"Shameless self-promotion work, if you see this please check out my other work:Child Of Shadow, A connla SI DXD fic that i barely update, at most a chapter a year, not to mention my snippets, that are deader than my discord server, anyway, please enjoy my fic, if you don't? I'm gonna teletransport to your home and kidnap your parents"

I've been watching this story since it started and I can say it's one of the best I've read and I sincerely hope you don't let it fall, you have my support man, keep it up!

As someone who read the original and was upset with the fact of the rewrite I can say that this version is without a doubt better. Not just with the story design but the details and references to actual Greek mythos. It shows the work and time you have to put into each chapter to make it as good as it is. I would rate this story (even as a ff has great storytelling) a 9.5/10 just because of how great it is. -.5 because of slow update but it’s understanable. Please keep the quality of the story as is and this will 100% become one of the best on this site period.

This is one of the best Fate fanfics on this platform. Icarus using his brains to defeat the birds was great! Hope you complete this and don't drop it!

It is very interesting to observe the hero in the age of the gods in the interpretation of this author. Many write fan fiction about the age of the gods, but because of their own incompetence conveniently forget that physics should not exist. The author here immerses us in the most authentic era of the gods, trying to take into account how the mythopoeia will affect the world order and the everyday life of the characters. The main character is pleasant to me. Icarus is moderately smart and wise, He seems to be planning many things far in advance and wants to realize his big dreams. Realizing that he is far behind on all fronts from his contemporaries with a divine heritage, he uses his diligence, ingenuity and metaznanie to break the local common sense on his knee. The description of the world and the disclosure of minor characters is well done. I would like the plot to progress a little faster. Updates happen quite rarely, but I wanted to wait for the release of a new chapter even after a six-month break.

This... This is so good! It's one of the best Fate fanfics! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I love this! I really really do! There is only one fear left for the future: .....Please don't let this become a Harem. Let it be a glorious single person relationship with actual character interactions and feelings! No one wants to "share" their partner, if they really love them. Possessiveness is something we all have and is quite attractive(in moderation).

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AMAZIING FANFIC........................................................................................................ Pls Don't Drop This...................................................

I have to say I really enjoyed the story. other than the update stability. I really like the story. I can wait for a week.[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

nicely written. good story progression. immersive world background. Try it you won't be disappointed. Hasn't disappointed me so far. ///////////

The writing is great and the characters are too. Hoping for a smart mc to use his modern knowledge in strange ways. [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]

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As the greatest (self proclaimed) author of one of the best (self proclaimed) fate fic, I liked the new design. Though I liked the previous version more. New one is more descriptive and slow paced. Please pin down the unnecessary monologue for sake of word count ☺️