PowerArmorGuy
Good, but too OP at the start in my opinion, but as of right now in the way the plot has been written nerfing wouldn't be possible in a logical way without increasing readers frustration, so best hopes on the authors endeavor but for my tastes of a story if he were to heed my selfishness would be a complete rewrite and risk of losing attraction from readers, so it's understandable, tally ho!
nice one author even though you are saying your new to writing a novel well this speaks you have a talent for it .. hoping this novel finishes or be continued even in a slow update . I gave you 5stars 🌟 over all. because fallout has so few novel out there. I encourage you author and thank you for the good read in this.
Was a decent story until he got mechu deru and some super natural ability to repair everything with in radius and created an army of robots in the early chapters. It sounds good but he just got it with no effort. Like it came to him on a silver platter. Everything he got was littlerally offered to him. He got nearly unlimited ammo and guns. And People in the vault Just Let him collect resources enough to create a tank. When He said he was going to leave, nobody refused because he just went 'I am special' and they accept it. I would've liked it if things were harder to get. This is a wasteland afterall. The characters have no depth in character. Female lead Just went 'I cant live without you' without any warning. I mean, I get it, they were together from childhood but we littleraly get no perspective of her falling in love or slowltiy showing affection. It Just felt like she was Just created for him. Not like the 'oh they are match made in heaven' kind. But more like 'You are created only to love him and nothing more'.