Reviews of Eve of the Doomsday
Eve of the Doomsday
Garessta
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- Character Design
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Interesting characters, world setting, and overall plot. While the writing is by no means flawless, it is at a much higher bar than the average original work on the site, and it grows and develops as the author continues to get more and more chapters under their belt. You can really see just how much growth the author has if you also take a peek at their other work, though this one is certainly worth reading as well, if you've already gotten to this point in the reviews I'm sure you've already seen the synopsis to gauge whether the setting is of interest to you or not. As a fellow author in this novel's discord server, I've had the privilege of helping as an idea soundboard for the upcoming story arc, and I can happily say that active readers have several things to look forward to, I'll resist the urge to give any spoilers >:3
Well I found this book after its completion, hence I can’t judge about the update stability. Still, I give it a 5 because this story deserves to be noted 5 overall. Writing is excellent. Story was completed when I found it. I’m around chapter 101 and the story developped quite well in that number of chapters. I love the characters, because they feel humans. Never expected the romantic turn of the story but it made sense that it happened when it did. And they are well matched, I think. The world is described well enough to be immersed in it. All in all, it is a very good short story so far. Let’s see how it ends !
Well written with a well depicted main character. The story develops at just the right pace, not too fast not too long, it's quite enjoyable. I like the nanite idea and am eager to see what more they have in store. Grammar issues are close to non-existent, making the reading flow smooth, unlike a lot of other novels on the website. All in all good job.
I have read quite a few zombie novels and the way it starts is generally the same except for this book. It shows the author's creativity and forethought. Also, there are clear origins for the system. It is not some kind of magic and well explained. The two characters that have been introduced are interesting and properly portrayed. The author does a good job in portraying the apocalyptic world giving. It felt like getting a tour of that world. Keep up the good work. :D
Highly recommended. Read it and you'll know why this book is worth reading. Starting from the characters to the plots and settings, and you'll see the development and the creativity the author had put it thoroughly. The writing style is very good too. It's different from other authors' writing style. I was a bit confused why it's a little bit underrated. Like the story is really well-written. Anyways, I hope many would read the book. It's good.
I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 8. (Since there wasn't more out yet.) Writing Quality: The only noticeable mistake was definitely caused by auto correct. It's good, especially if it's really the first book. Story Development: I don't usually like zombie stories, which makes this a pleasant surprise. The mystery keeps you hooked, then kicks the character development in and the action. I couldn't stop before I read everything. Character Design: The main character is clever, without seeming like a know it all. A difficult balancing act, but it worked here. There wasn't much from the side characters, but it's still early. And what was there is making me more interested. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Seems like Earth. But the nanotechnology based magic system is interesting. If you would even like to call that magic. I would thought. The ability of the main character make for unlimited possibilities! Or near that. I wonder what's going to happen with that. Summary: It's not much right now, in terms of chapters. But it's promising. And you should check out the review that the writer wrote. It's amazing!
[img=update] One: Add to library [img=update] Two: Vote [img=update] Three: Gift the author Oi meanie, do you listen to rock music? Totally irrelevant question sure, but this book flows well with rock playing in the background. I planned on reading just the first chapter and went on to read the whole thing. I like the story line and I was too in the zone to notice errors. I'll read again just so I can roast you back. *adds evil laugh in the end.
