Reviews of Ethan; A Story Untold (HxH fanfic)

Here is an honest review of my own novel, i cant promise to update everyday and would soon have exams to deal with, but i would at-least try to post a chapter once a week

my honest opinion currently is that this fan-fic is off to a good start I love the way you write and the description and details the thought put into explaining nen better and I have come to appreciate this fan-fic and I hope you keep writing.

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This review is not part of any review swap, as I always stress on the basic idea that all the authors learn with the time, their own style, their grip on the story and all that comes with time, being freshman in the writing world, it's no doubt a good effort, the certain part of development lapse the actual strength of the character, and I hope fellow author will come up such problems in future, last but not least, the grammar is better than my own writing, so yeah, enjoy the reading...

Read up until chapter 10. First, writing quality was good. I like how you narrated the story and how detailed you explained the nen, karma and others stuffs. Everything was good, but all chapters need editing as there were a few mispelled or wrongly used conjunctions. But still, writing-wise you did good. Second, the clean narration made the entire story flow naturally as if the scenes happened in front of me. And i gave full five stars in character design and story development. You did great in both aspects. World building was there, but not too good. It might be because of the lack of chapters, but there were hints of possible exploration and development. Suggestion: Maintain the current pacing as it is already great. Edit every chapter as there were a few grammatical errors/mispelled words. Overall: Great story, Potential is 100%, If this was not a fanfic and was made as original, you could have gotten contract already. Good job!

you want see the mc talk to himself ,you want him to talk to a cat ,a dog ,you want to read how he destroyed a tree then this novel is for you cause It got nothing else