Review Detail of Condemned in Ethan; A Story Untold (HxH fanfic)

Read up until chapter 10. First, writing quality was good. I like how you narrated the story and how detailed you explained the nen, karma and others stuffs. Everything was good, but all chapters need editing as there were a few mispelled or wrongly used conjunctions. But still, writing-wise you did good. Second, the clean narration made the entire story flow naturally as if the scenes happened in front of me. And i gave full five stars in character design and story development. You did great in both aspects. World building was there, but not too good. It might be because of the lack of chapters, but there were hints of possible exploration and development. Suggestion: Maintain the current pacing as it is already great. Edit every chapter as there were a few grammatical errors/mispelled words. Overall: Great story, Potential is 100%, If this was not a fanfic and was made as original, you could have gotten contract already. Good job!