ArtemisSabariaga
So far into the book, it’s interesting and really well developed but I do agree that the author needs to fix a few writing errors. Was a little disappointed when the author complained about people saying they need a editor which I don’t really agree but maybe someone to look over the mistakes. I make mistakes to in my grammar but have people that help me fix it. The writing doesn’t take away from the great story this is. Just sometimes I get confused and that could only be because of my small brain but anyway. I recommend this book. Also, little advice author I know it’s annoying to hear people say you need an editor but you just need to ignore those people and make great work. Sorry if this review is confusing.
Well so far (chapter 5) is is very a stereotypical zombie world, were mc (relives) apocalypse before it starts and has space abilities with upgrading healing lake, but also has more abilities, that will probably make the mc not be put into the (has space) but can not kick ass as most mc do.........well the grammar is not great, but at least it is understandable and not confusing.......I am not sure if this will be an “original” story with a stereotypical start, or just a “copy”, or almost same as others......well the fact the mc has powers other then space, he will probably have much more fight instead of mainly fight.....well good luck