Review Detail of Suicidal_landfish in Eternal Love: Zombie Apocalypse (BL)
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Well I would say the best part of this novel is release rate. the story seems to be going towards an “original” story with a start and background that is used quite a bit......well so far so good (chapter 22), good luck
Eternal Love: Zombie Apocalypse (BL)
ArtemisSabariaga
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Well, I read it a while back, so not sure how great my memory of it is. but the thing I did not like was that he has a little too much “easy” and “born” power, not only was he one of the best “fighters” when he died, he now gained a head start and an extra power and a decent team with little effort and before the zombies have become a real problem to the people But things I stated are not necessarily bad, being op is part of being a mc, and there are others that are worse, but from as far as I have gone into it, it is still in the “stereotypical apocalypse intro” part, so at least you made it “different” then others so far, if that is a good thing or not, we can only wait and see
ArtemisSabariaga:Thank you for reading my story. Can you please tell me the things that i need to improve in my story?
Suicidal_landfish:Well, I read it a while back, so not sure how great my memory of it is. but the thing I did not like was that he has a little too much “easy” and “born” power, not only was he one of the best “fighters” when he died, he now gained a head start and an extra power and a decent team with little effort and before the zombies have become a real problem to the people But things I stated are not necessarily bad, being op is part of being a mc, and there are others that are worse, but from as far as I have gone into it, it is still in the “stereotypical apocalypse intro” part, so at least you made it “different” then others so far, if that is a good thing or not, we can only wait and see