Reviews of Ending the Immortal Era!

Hi! Honest shameless self review here! This is a personal small project that I'm working on to improve my English writing skills for my studies. The story is a bit slow towards the beginning but I promise you it'll get exiting very soon. As for characters I'm just recently getting the hand of writing them so I'll improve with time. Also I'll try to upload long chapters as I personally am not a fan of short chapters but I'll never go above 2000 words! Old chapters will be continually reworked on in order to make them at least readable lol. So if you have time please don't hesitate to point out the mistakes, I'll correct them later on.

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.