Ending the Immortal Era!

From the oldest recorded annals of history, till the present day immortals and cultivators have ruled over all of creation with an unbreakable grasp! They pillage...They steal...They destroy...They hold no compassion, no understanding whatsoever for us mortals! Because, aren't we less than insects in their eyes? But no longer shall this reality continue to exist, for I will take away and burn this era of the immortals to the ground to achieve true peace. Yao Tian: Destroying the world is easy, even a talentless weakling can do it. This is a small project that I am working on in order to improve my English writing skills. There are still loads of grammar mistakes and some typos that I missed so please be patient with me. Also I am opened to critisim or even ideas of how you think I can improve my story. Thank you for reading!