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Not reading the complete novel yet still reviewing it makes this review less authentic, however let me share my thoughts on it. *** 01. The Plot Mix-Up. The plot of the novel seems good and properly aligned to how a web novel should be. However, the author just dumped a whole lot of plot at the beginning. The start should've been slow with the MC exploring the world and raising his strength in the tutorial village. But suddenly his 'first wife' who's a succubus comes and unfolds the readers some damn big plot, which is a given. However it broke the link to the ongoing plot and made me feel that what's going on right now is a waste of time. In short, it just killed the tension a reader has for the Protagonist. The tension here was the question of how the MC is going to increase his strength and status, how would he survive in the new world. Also, after breaking the beginner plot with the huge plot, the beginner plot continues again which I found very weird. For me the plot just didn't flow naturally. 02. The Humiliated Protagonist. Okay, this point might create an argument since there are different types of readers. Some are casual, some are invested in the story but still independent, while others are immersive readers. I am the third kind, an immersive reader. For this reason I don't like if the MC is humiliated or acts like a loser. Since I'm reading a web novel, I'm here for the MC getting high in his life, getting all the wealth, women, power and status. However the beginning was a little disappointing for me. Yes, it's incorrect to criticize just for this since the plot would develop, however the starting chapters unfortunately didn't catch my interest. 03. Dumb MC Are dumb MC's bad? Of course not. If the story needs it, a dumb MC can enrich the plot. However, for a moment just imagine. You're suddenly transmigrated into another world. You don't know anything about it, except that you perhaps might be a Protagonist material according to the web novels you've read. You don't know anybody, and you don't know the intentions of the people around you. You don't know the world's history or culture, but you know that there are similar people like him that have come from other worlds. You don't have money or anything, and you didn't even have any clothes when you arrived. So would you make some bet to date a girl, or would you try your best to make yourself safe? Yes, the MC later acquires god-like powers and perhaps nobody would be able to harm him, but what I'm talking here was his attitude. Unfortunately I was here for some scheming and strategies and stuff like that, but the story beginning was a little different. *** In the end, this story is not for me, but it might be for you.
If you are going to be a dicck about it.. Go on.. Saying that the author's writing is worse than a kid... Saying MC is being Dumb. Broken English.. collection of words... Calling this novel trash.. You fuΓkΓrs have not even read 50 chps and start reviewing this reading 2 to 10 chaps.. Every body started feeling like they are the great reviewers of all time..putting **** out there... For all of those who reviewed this as trash... have you ever written a novel... do you F****** know how challenging it is to write a novel...... Do you know how consistent you need to be to meet fans expectations every day.. Do you know how your reviews make author's feel like.... They are not Super rich and have time to write novels all day... Many of these authors struggle day to day with there own problems and still write chapters at night... If you wish to support the author or help him in his growth..tell him what he could improve..and what he is lacking...Don't put upfornt posters of your ****ty opinions Coming to me... This is a f****** good novel.. The grammar has never f******* bothered me... I loved the f******* comedy that was crazy lit everytime... Has good plot.. Good world building... Good progress.. Loved it through out... and hoping that author would continue it soon....
This is beyond trash!!! I can't believe anyone who reads would actually see this piece of shoddily collected words as a suitable read!!! It is not only a waste of time and space it is disappointingly poor in every sense. No coordination in the writing. World building is non-existent. The characters have no builds. The descriptive prowess of the writer is nothing to write home about. This is a waste of time. Do not read this.
This novel is really good with my only problem really being the amount of chapters that it can take for the Mc to decide to break trough. Even though it is extremely great it has few readers compared to many other novels wich I think is sad. And I think that the reason for that is both that this novel never is in any webnovel tournament/event and the novels cover. The cover isn't really representing the novel well and I personally almost didn't read the novel because I disliked the cover. Anyway great story with a good Mc.
fucking awesome! this is what a great story should read like ! love it ! this needs to be made into a movie , the author is a genius , a visionary , a pioneer in originality . yo this novel is really good , immersive , thrilling and exciting , keep it going and keep it coming , i'm hungry for more , don't tease me , give me satisfaction , i need more chapters !
Muhahahahaha! The funny stuff already made me happy for this book. The world building is already there, and the characters are interesting. I hope to see some fantastic action scenes and pervy stuff. The story, with regards to earlier chapters is not too deep. It leans to be entertaining and funny. Well it's good.