You need to edit your review. It's absolutely unreadable. Divide it in paragraphs.

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Ya. We came here to read about an OP MC.

This is just another "China nambah one" novel. It's a waste of time to read it. It's even hard to understand why Webnovel even translates suck kind of novels.

where's the romance, marriage, and divorce part?

people

Only an idiot would think like this. This is the whole "computers will take our jobs" thing all over again.

The core idea of the novel is very interesting. A mentally challenged prince son of a powerful Emperor has been abandoned, but has a saving grace in the form of five wives with various backgrounds and talents. It has all the things needed for a successful commercial web novel. Unfortunately, since this is a solo project, without any editors or prompt feedback, the entire story is full of deficiencies. 01. Grammer. This is the least serious deficiency of this novel, and it could've been easily solved had the author utilized any writing tool. For instance, Grammerly or even Google Docs. 02. Conflict between cheats. The MC has two cheats. He has been trained by various goddesses, and he also has a system. Introducing both of these cheats have made the whole 'cheat system' feel conflicted and confusing. Any one of them should've been enough. 03. Confusing character behavior. For me the last straw on the hat was the scene where the MC asks Riya for an instructor to teach him. This doesn't make sense since he has already been taught by the goddesses, who are at the top of the world. 04. Too much cheat. The background setting for the MC is very well-written and extremely interesting. However, after explaining the MC's background, we are introduced to how the MC dies and meets the goddesses. I feel like the goddess part was too much of a cheat... That's just too high of a setting! Also, the wives being the daughters of the goddess was just too much of a cheat. This is a kinda controversial point, since some readers might be okay with it, while others like me might feel it's too much. Despite all these faults, at its core this story is a solid one, a rough diamond. What it needs at this moment is a rewrite as well as a good editor. I'd recommend you give it a shot.

but don't the citizens get the benefit of social security net? it's way better than being in a situation where you can't afford to buy medicine or fear getting sick since the treatment would drown you into so much debt you'd die.

It should've been either the system or the training.

sleep -> asleep.

The Four Part Architecture is not it's name, but rather one of the styles of classical architecture.

Finalmente alguien que puede entender cómo funcionan las cosas aquí. Muchas personas aún no saben cuán diferentes son las novelas web del formato de novela tradicional.

They aren't exaggerating. A typical web novel chapter length is 1500 - 3000 words. Web novels are different from traditional novels. They don't need to have perfect worlds or complex writing style. They are like junk food. For example, novels with Sign-in systems are popular nowadays.

fire the boss and take his position.

The prime purpose of web novels (and light novels, from which web novels have been derived from) is wish-fulfillment. If you seek a 'proper' novel, you can just read a regular novel. Of course, there also exist many good web novels that don't focus on wish-fulfillment. 'Royal Road' is a good platform for those.

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but why send them overseas when Vhina also has one of the best universities?

bro what you doing in Antarctica?

This novel is better than the many, many others found on this platform. The writing is fluid, easy and logical, and the story does not contain any nonsense elements. I hope this novel gets picked up.