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I loved the story .. it was like a fairytale (full of sudden life changing experience and decisions) yet simple and elegant i must say.. But editing part was little bit have some corrections like some paragraphs were written two times and sometimes thrice in a chapter... But that was only problem .. other than this book was β€οΈ
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Summary <<It's free so give it a try but it needs editing imo>> My thoughts: I finished this novel in a few days & since it's completed no need to wait for updates. The chapters felt long which is nice since there aren't many. I enjoyed the plot overall & the story was nice. With all that said it definitely needs EDITING. There were multiple times the same "paragraph" would be back to back. Then there were places where the story would just be repeated or drawn out as it the author was simply trying to make it unnecessarily longer.. Especially towards the end.. There were a few other places that had me scratching my head as a little research would help in areas.. I applaud the author for putting it out here, good job..
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Thanks author for such a beautiful story . I have actually loved all your stories and they are all amazing , the sense of humour , the educative part of love and others . Thanks for sharing this amazing story with us . Hope to see more stories from you. And keep it up . You are just amazing with your novelsβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈππ
A get story, I wish a lot of book get point of the story not dragged to 500 to 1000 chapters.π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€π€ππππππππππππππππππππππππππ