Review Detail of theOnlyLA in Emery: A Prince's Adventure

Summary <<It's free so give it a try but it needs editing imo>> My thoughts: I finished this novel in a few days & since it's completed no need to wait for updates. The chapters felt long which is nice since there aren't many. I enjoyed the plot overall & the story was nice. With all that said it definitely needs EDITING. There were multiple times the same "paragraph" would be back to back. Then there were places where the story would just be repeated or drawn out as it the author was simply trying to make it unnecessarily longer.. Especially towards the end.. There were a few other places that had me scratching my head as a little research would help in areas.. I applaud the author for putting it out here, good job..