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theOnlyLA6mthCommentedno.. wander across her path, allow her to attempt what she started at the gala & let her try to smack you, catch her hand, & then proceed to beating the ever living lort outta her! great plan
Katherine just hoped that the day will turn out okay with Lexi being there. All she had to do was stay away from her.- theOnlyLA6mthCommented
bad dog!
William watched as the three of them walked away and a knowing smile slowly appeared on his face as though he had something planned. Hearing what Katherine said to Lexi earlier, it made him like her more. She was such a headstrong person and he hadn't met a lot of women like her. She was such a treasure. And he wanted to get his hands on her. - theOnlyLA6mthCommented
I'm gonna laugh my butt off if it's a freakin wedding dress!
"Ah… Yes. It's a little heavier than I expected but I can manage… I think…" Katherine replied. - theOnlyLA6mthCommented
O.O finally
"For Christ's sake, Falcon! Why are you doing yoga in the dark?!" he spat as he limped his way towards a figure at the corner of the room. - theOnlyLA7mthCommented
I wanna pop him in the nose with a rolled up newspaper & say "no! bad dog!"
"Hmmm… You look beautiful in that dress, Ms. Miller." He had a cocky smile on his face as he studied her figure. He was proud that he learned about her name. When Katherine did not respond, he added, "I hope you don't mind me asking but I am actually also looking for a new secretary. Are you perhaps looking for a better opportunity? Park Group takes 'great care' of their people." - theOnlyLA7mthCommented
ooops! but heck ya.. by now your bodies are kinda on auto
As soon as he got inside the elevator, his head snapped towards the side and brought a hand over his face. "Sh*t." - theOnlyLA7mthCommented
it's William!!
Even without turning his head, Damien knew whose voice it belonged to. "William," he muttered and sipped his wine. - theOnlyLA11mthCommented
at this day & age it's a lost cause experiment but heart transplant..
"Well then… we will try more. We will try harder." She said standing up. - theOnlyLA11mthReplied to JasmineJosef
😉 oh I know
He could learn some gentlemanly conduct, she thought to herself. - theOnlyLA11mthCommented
oh poor Daisy 😁
The room fell silent, and Daisy's heart stopped beating. - theOnlyLA1yrCommented
note to yourself? 😉
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I usually don't write reviews until after I've completed a book, but I am doing this anyway. I first wanted to review at the end of the last free chapter but even at the halfway mark, which is where I am now, my comments are about the same. Negatives.. This story is overly wordy & straight up repetitive. For the plot to have only come so far at this point & yet take up so many chapter is well a drag. The pace is too slow, & it's not even a slow-burn romance. It also doesn't feel real. I'm not saying a situation like this couldn't happen; I'm saying the writing isn't drawing me in. It's brimming full of emotional phrases, but every character is one-sided, & when they try to be complex they contradict themselves, especially the FL. The single chapters don't always flow as cohesive story. Their relationship is founded on toxic gaslighting & abuse. When the author skips throught half the year there's so much "dreaming" I wasn't sure that's what was happening. Overall there's just too much mush & unnecessary violence. Positives.. The world sounds beautiful. perhaps this is simply not my writing style.
This book has been deleted. - theOnlyLA1yrReplied to author_aruel
I've been good! how are you? I've kept your book in my library 😁 I watched it shrink & now it's blooming! That's so great! I've been waiting to do a reread but I've gotta pace myself 😉 so I figure I'll do a broad chapter at a time.. I'll shoot for everyday but life's a bit more.. I am so excited tho! it looks amazing! oh I could drag on & on at the end of each chapter 😏 but I figured unless something really hits that makes me "just gotta share" I'll just post my feelings at the end with emojis 🙃
Ch 1 | Prologue - theOnlyLA1yrCommentedCh 4 | Spirit of a Teacher, Sword of a General (Part II)
- theOnlyLA1yrCommentedCh 3 | Spirit of a Teacher, Sword of a General (Part I)
- theOnlyLA1yrCommentedCh 2 | For Brothers
- theOnlyLA1yrCommentedCh 1 | Prologue
- theOnlyLA1yrCommented
you four (the priests, Ares & Ravina) need to have a small get together.. perhaps even add the other 2, although that might cause some heat, at first BUT at least everything can get out there & they can finally put pride & bs aside to get on the same page..
"I might have to speak to Ankine. From what I know, if you can speak the language, it comes naturally. You don't have to study it." - theOnlyLA1yrCommented
not very long but she'll eventually get over it.
How long would that last? - theOnlyLA1yrCommented
Mhmm... A massage is never just a massage 😉
Malachi allowed his fingers to glide up to her neck and rub away the tension there. She relaxed a little.