Goldenking
This really surprised me! Good a truly good find. I’ve read the whole thing in a day. As others have already mentioned it’s a rare find where there’s no instant God Slayer Mode from the beginning, thus, allowing you to develop a relationship with the protagonist! I would like to see our protagonist go on more missions that aren’t already know plot points covered by other movies, cartoons, or comics. But the ones already in there are very good, I just would like to see more. Greedy, I know, but it’s got so many places you could take it! Excitedly waiting, Civ.
One of the rare Si's where the MC isn't instantly OP. There is a realistic step to step process to how he grows his powers and developing his character. However, I do see the lack of any real side character besides Peter. It would be nice to have additional reoccurring heros making more appearances and see how they influence the MC. Besides that I am kinda bothered with his memory lost and hope you'll get that fixed soon. Otherwise this fic is definitely worth a read as it is very entertaining. If you through in an antagonist it could be even better.
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Great chapter,the only thing i think is missing in your story is the MC's social live,i mean peter has felicia and even his mom has a boyfriend but the MC has yet to show interest in a girl. Maybe jean grey?Or even mary jane now that peter is with felicia?I would like if you paired MJ with the MC as there are few storys of an OCxMj.
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