Great chapter,the only thing i think is missing in your story is the MC's social live,i mean peter has felicia and even his mom has a boyfriend but the MC has yet to show interest in a girl. Maybe jean grey?Or even mary jane now that peter is with felicia?I would like if you paired MJ with the MC as there are few storys of an OCxMj.
Goldenking
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