Myumara
POSITIVE I like villains, have you read warlock magus world? wonderful. The mc does not start in konoha. he is not a friend of naruto or emosasuke the author questions the world of naruto ninjas are cold-blooded assassins NEGATIVE so far I have not seen any elder scrolls is a fanfic and all fanfics have the same problem, the personality of the characters the author clearly has problems fanfic fanboys are found, this is a serious problem call the insect exterminator now! Did I mention that the author does not know how to receive "constructive criticism"? I would like to reptir, There is no fanfic of 5 stars. 5 stars: The Lord of the Rings 3 stars: a good story the best of fanfics 1 star: can you give zero for this sh.it?
I don't really read fan fics much but this one is quite fun to read. I myself am an Otaku so reading a Naruto fan fic is a fun thing for me, but this one is especially fun to read its nothing serious and the flow is ok with me. For everyone else no need to take things so seriously just sit back and enjoy the ride. :)
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Unique, engaging and innovative. This novel is so much more than your average system fic. Not only does it have on point grammar, the world building and charater design make the reader on the edge of their seat and making his own version of the naruto setting rather than purely using the pre existing story setting as a crutch.