Monster_Paradise
Nice story and great plot for chapter12 I hope author can slow down plot story πππππ Buyctxzrezufyfsydigrsrs7g7grsuhuft9g8foff7rd8rdrsyesyxtiiyvoyc7rz48fu9gdr7t8fufyf7gigdtwtcibih8gyftdyf5fug7g6fughufdrsrtgihobuctstvivyxrsrfufydtcufydyfufih6duhigyfustcycugihifydyfivudycugihufudydtdtduftayf7ghues4fyhctacihigyetf4stfugifyfihigifufjfufuf
Top 3 fan fiction dragon ball series for me keep good job πππππ 5f4ffrghytfe3drdbutfghctgjyggfttdtfhhhfcygyfxgytdxygtxdghfytdedwdwdwderght2d25gj6jythecefyhyhefwxwdgh6v6fr7tg5d6f6yr6c6rrf6drtddw4r6c5f7f6f6yttg6tf76ddrg76dd6g7f7d6f7g8d6f7g8d5yd6f7g86dfff6f7d6f77f7f7d6f7g7d6d6fug8fuf6gigiguufgufudyf7f7d6fud6d6f7fu
Im really liking this the mc's actions are quite realistic similar to what I would do. Although some parts of the story were bit forced. Looking forward to when he meets goku, that is if author doesn't drop which is v ofter here -.- .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I'm in chapter 11 and in the intro of 12 I really liked the concept of the story but the execution is bad many things happen because yes, without prior explanation the author does not explain things very well or the thought process of the mc and if he does he does it in a very simple way The truth is that I would like to see more but it is a pain in the eyes that leaves me with questions like, how? , why? I would give him another chance if he edited the previous chapters **: this review was made without any hatred for the story or the author and this is just my personal opinion and if you like the story it's fine for you