I know I'm nitpicking and I'm sorry for that. But assuming occlumency work that way and Hermione died from death eaters attack, then she shouldn't has such proficiency in it to not make a mistake atleast once. And how much dumb can mc be to not even consider her reincarnation?
Author writing quality is excellent. So, it really was surprised to me when I found how annoyingly stupid the story was constructed. Even after mc stupid decisions, the story was funny in it's first ark( Harry Potter). The second (The mummy) has 5-6 chapter regarding hyena meat. I know it's to flesh out mcs of the movie and it works too, but I can't help but feel frustrated reading those chapters. And we have third ark(resident evil 3) were we have a completely different mc. At this point, I don't even know what was author thinking to tell the story of a completely different person midway of the story. That's the point I stopped reading(ch.78) as all the subsequent chapters are in cailian pov. So, most likely mc of this story didn't appears in this ark. It's sad that although the author writing is good, but changing mc midway isn't wise choice in any story.