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  • oceansage
    oceansage16d
    Replied to FanHarem

    馃う

    Ch 85 The Dragon Rises (1)
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  • oceansage
    oceansage16d
    Commented

    What does bimborochi looks like?

    Ch 85 The Dragon Rises (1)
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    Filthy Gamer in Narutoverse
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  • oceansage
    oceansage21d
    Replied to ViniDrako23

    +4

    Ch 33 Chapter 32
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  • oceansage
    oceansage29d
    Replied to emerson_quadros

    Then what about coby and helmeppo? They didn't have any df but still became powerful in short time. And mc is only using his df, also he isn't that strong to begin with, but author is still nerfing him. Brook and luffy instantly recover their broken skull and teeth respectively, but mc is having problems with his pores and that also for five f*cking months. 馃憦馃憦馃憦

    Ch 63 Confession of Feelings and Insecurities
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  • oceansage
    oceansage29d
    Commented

    Did the system enslaved mc? He can't even sleep as he likes, and has to do what system told him to do?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: I can draw, you know...
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Commented

    Why does it feel like this chapter is all over the place? Conversations b/w characters also doesn't feel right.

    Ch 22 Chapter 22
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Replied to GodPL

    Yes, it totally is.

    Ch 12 Who can stand the spider girl?
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Commented

    Yes, of course! Since when did tournaments have monetary rewards? And why would mc need money for anything? On serious note, what are you smoking bro? There are way too many mistakes.

    Ch 9 The Tournament
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Commented

    Is Raven running a charity organization? Mc stayed with her for 6 months without doing anything.

    Ch 4 Training always pays off !
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Posted

    ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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    Playing as a Bender (Avatar: Last Airbender SI)
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  • oceansage
    oceansage1mth
    Replied to Xouldrion

    So, if humans start to move to menagerie, you expect the faunus to welcome them with open arms? And those faunus who has been discriminated against, that are migrating to menagerie, also won't hold grudges? A) what does menagerie stability got to do with mc? B) wasn't mc a billionaire? Would it be too hard for him to earn money again to buy land? Since mc is in one of the four huntsman academy, he can openly sell his paintings too. D) you expect menagerie people/ozpin/ironwood to hand over all the resources to mc without any hesitation or question? H) what fallback shelter you are talking about? If beacon academy and vale kingdom can fall because of Salem, you are expecting a new kingdom like menagerie to act as a shelter?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 - Training and Planting the necessary seeds
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    RWBY - Job System [for now dropped]
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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Posted

    I'm surprised by the sheer lack of reviews this fanfic has. This is honestly a well thought out fanfiction. It might just be the best rwby fanfic of all time, seeing how meticulous the Author really is. This ff doesn't deserve anything less than 5 stars.

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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Commented

    Author wants mc to have thunder type df. I think this df would be eaten by nojiko. And I don't like it.

    Ch 23 Losing Devil Fruit
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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Posted

    This is gold in terms of writing. Author is really smart. 馃憤 Mc is weak at the beginning but he is pretty badass. Don't be discourage by the fact that mc is following straw hats, author has done excellent job with mc character development and character interactions to make it enjoyable.

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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Replied to KojiSan

    That's the dilemma I'm facing. This story is good and bad at the same time. Your writing style and flow of the story is excellent 馃憣, but the scenarios are ...... 馃槓

    Ch 20 Red Cloud
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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Commented

    Bro, I really don't want to be rude but instinct is an subconscious action, meaning you take action even before thinking. It is not something one can ignore due to arrogance. I do get what you are trying here, and I don't think you nerfed him, but this is still a forced plot.

    Ch 19 Arc 3 - Arrogance
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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Commented

    Bro.......... Airships are strategical weapons. Buying it during war from an enemy nation is already beyond impossible, let alone from a enemy nation with feudal system.

    Ch 20 Red Cloud
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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Posted

    After reading till 17th chapter, I have mix feelings about this ff. First of all, writing quality of this ff is great. Author has done great job there. What really make me pull out my hair is how nonsensical the scenarios are, and how anyone can teleport anywhere. Let me explain, 1st, mc spawns at air temple, and first thing he thinks of, is to save iroh's kids, who by the way are part of fire Nation army, just because he has seen iroh on TV. 2nd, he traveled to kiyoshi Island by riding on a fish's back, purely by accident, like they are neighbors. And to top it off, kiyoshi village suspect a f*cking 8 years old kid of being a spy, to the point that it's village head even wants to interrogate him. 3rd, author described beifong family like it's the only rich and influential family in the world, like even the fire Nation as a whole is beneath it. What happens is, after leaving kiyoshi village, mc attacks fire nation outpost for the sake of money. But after amassing enough personal funds, he happily agrees to work for beifongs. What's even more retarded is that, mc said "its idiotic to offend beifongs", but he is completely alright to have offended a whole f*cking nation. 4th, toph escaped from her home and went all the way to foggy swamps in just 3 days, as a 4-5 years old BLIND KID. By the way, mc himself took a week for the same journey. 5th, fire Nation soldier start attacking a lost 4-5 year old blind girl. Why? f*ck logic that's why!

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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Posted

    Loved it so far. Definitely recommended. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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  • oceansage
    oceansage2mth
    Commented

    Naruto is 2 years old and he is kicked out of orphanage? Author do u have any idea how little a two year old is? Don't say bullsh*t like, they mature faster due to Chakra, a 2 year old is still an infant, even in Shinobi world.

    Ch 7 Volume I: Beginning Chapter 7: Naruto
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