Sigh Definitely needs more reviews. No complaints from me. Though, story is slightly au. ///////////////////777///////////////////////////////////////////////////

There is nothing to complain about. From mc powers to story progression, everything is perfect. I just hope that author is able to complete it. Because it's really a massive project.

You are doing great. Keep it up 👍 ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////%%%%%%%%%%%%%///////////////////

Thanks and happy new year.

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Why didn't you change it?

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I like it. /////////////////////////////////////////////7//7////////////////////////////////////////////////////77/7//////////////////////////////////////////////////////

In your narration please don't break 4th wall. It's not likable at all. I'm surprised that no one has commented about it.

I haven't read a single word but if you know Author's previous work, you will know this will also be fire. //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

No, it's not MTL. It is edited well enough. Author has done good job.

Just Tom alone makes this fanfic 5 star worthy. /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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Author fully deserve 5 star for this fanfic. /////////////////////////////////////%/////////////%//////////////%//////////////////%///////////////%///////////////

I'll be honest, there are 3 shortcomings in your POV writing. 1. As you have mentioned, it slows down the story. 2. POVs like this one, becomes like a recap with some extra information. 3. In these POVs, I find that all characters are dumb down versions of their original counterpart. I am not trying to discourage you. I like this story so far, and I hope that you can improve these POVs a little. At least make their thinking process more complex like adults. Another thing that bothers me so much, is that in Taiwan's POVs, he never expressed his pride or surprise, that his son, is WAY TOO intelligent and strong from his age. I mean atleast he should be filled with pride that his own blood is so strong and intelligent at such a young age. Instead you casually mentioned it in his POVs like it's no big deal.

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More people should be reading this. //////////////////////////\//////////////////////////////////////////////////////\///////////////////////////////

"Japanese are not humans" I think most of the Chinese authors are just a step away from mental asylum.