Boltz_Theone
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earths mightiest hero?
well, it doesn't really matter, but I think you should start showing more detail so that the reader won't feel lost when something happens, atleast let the Mc say where he got stuff from and stuff like that, don't mind me tho, your doing good.
where does he get the weights from?
true, let's not make him the Sakura of the pokemon world.
tbh it doesn't really matter, he said he was going the warrior route but most of what he does now is magic, but oh well.
did you not read?, he has a satellite phone, whatever it is, makes him call from anywhere I guess
lol, mistakes happen
why???
but it's basically blood money...
just telport to where you need to go, boom stolen
nah, the Mc said he was gonna go the warrior route, so that won't fit him, looks like something a soccerer would wear.
sigh...
bro you can't see what you reading, you mean imagination
bro, Hercules is not incorrect, heracles is just his Greek name, and Hercules is the Roman equivalent.
yo pls stop complaining, it's over now, he is a warrior just deal with it.
lol