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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
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    Great so far, reviewing from chapter 8, this is everything I have been looking for, everything is looking OK right now, the only thing that needs improvement is the writing quality, besides that, this is quite good, I very much recommend.

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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    Lol great chapter

    Ch 2 Trouble already?
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    unique start, keep up the good work.

    Ch 1 The beginning
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    earths mightiest hero?

    "He is more than an ally, he is earth's mightiest hero but that's just my opinion." Fury chuckled.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Plug_O_Stien

    well, it doesn't really matter, but I think you should start showing more detail so that the reader won't feel lost when something happens, atleast let the Mc say where he got stuff from and stuff like that, don't mind me tho, your doing good.

    Rex once again nodded in satisfaction and then continued further into the forest. by now it was getting dark and he needed to find a place to camp. soon he found a lake that was just deep enough to let Gyarados swim without feeling uncomfortable. Rex soon let out his pokemon with Gyarados creating a massive splash causing all the fish to scurry away in fright of the massive blood-red Gyarados. Machop was much more sensible as it learned more discipline due to its martial art training. Luckily it was still bright enough outside to have a quick training session. Rex fired up the system and followed what it had provided Rex with. He proceeded to take machop towards the lake and started underwater breathing exercises to increase its endurance and punching while being weighted down to increase pressure. Then he followed it up with footwork drills that boxers do, and then some hand speed work before finishing it off with some weighted exercises. As for Gyarados, it was strapped with weights and began to do laps around the lake. after that, it settled down and started practice its control over its energy since it had a lot more moves it had to make sure that it could use them effectively and efficiently. Machop did the same after its gruelling training and started to practice its energy manipulation again. Rex had of course not neglected his body and had joined Machop when it did its physical workout.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    where does he get the weights from?

    Rex once again nodded in satisfaction and then continued further into the forest. by now it was getting dark and he needed to find a place to camp. soon he found a lake that was just deep enough to let Gyarados swim without feeling uncomfortable. Rex soon let out his pokemon with Gyarados creating a massive splash causing all the fish to scurry away in fright of the massive blood-red Gyarados. Machop was much more sensible as it learned more discipline due to its martial art training. Luckily it was still bright enough outside to have a quick training session. Rex fired up the system and followed what it had provided Rex with. He proceeded to take machop towards the lake and started underwater breathing exercises to increase its endurance and punching while being weighted down to increase pressure. Then he followed it up with footwork drills that boxers do, and then some hand speed work before finishing it off with some weighted exercises. As for Gyarados, it was strapped with weights and began to do laps around the lake. after that, it settled down and started practice its control over its energy since it had a lot more moves it had to make sure that it could use them effectively and efficiently. Machop did the same after its gruelling training and started to practice its energy manipulation again. Rex had of course not neglected his body and had joined Machop when it did its physical workout.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Einstein3

    true, let's not make him the Sakura of the pokemon world.

    AN: the useless simp brock about to get a beating? who knows, stay tuned and as always leave comment if you enjoyed.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Shin_Senpai

    tbh it doesn't really matter, he said he was going the warrior route but most of what he does now is magic, but oh well.

    Two months later after my quest within SHIELD, I decided to start on a new project, yes, yes I know, I already had many projects, the one of me becoming a geneticist, and the one of me becoming a billionaire, but like those two, this project was also very important, for it would drastically increase my chances of survival, I needed, an armor.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Randomguyno1

    did you not read?, he has a satellite phone, whatever it is, makes him call from anywhere I guess

    "If you let me answer my phone, I can get you that proof!" I growled back.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Xanderix

    lol, mistakes happen

    "I will in a bit, but first, I need everything you have on Carol Denvers, if she killed a bug and was recorded I want it, ok?" That information would help Carol to understand she was being used, I hoped.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to AllBullshit

    why???

    [New Quest Created: Captain Marvel and the Kree
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    but it's basically blood money...

    What can I say, I think it's morally right to steal from thieves and murderers.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    just telport to where you need to go, boom stolen

    Which meant, if I really wanted to do this, to have a suit of armor of my own, I had to find a way to contact no other than Ulysses Klaus, the Vibranium stealer.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Shin_Senpai

    nah, the Mc said he was gonna go the warrior route, so that won't fit him, looks like something a soccerer would wear.

    Two months later after my quest within SHIELD, I decided to start on a new project, yes, yes I know, I already had many projects, the one of me becoming a geneticist, and the one of me becoming a billionaire, but like those two, this project was also very important, for it would drastically increase my chances of survival, I needed, an armor.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Commented

    sigh...

    In pain, Bucky staggered back. But soon turned around, using his metal arm to punch my guts, breaking a few of my ribs in the process, then as I doubled over in pain he kneed my face with savage strength, throwing me into the snow, once on the snow, gasping in pain, he jumped on me and started to choke me with his metal arm, as I started to question my choices, why was I even doing this? 
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Baldysalino

    bro you can't see what you reading, you mean imagination

    ~I know you didn't plan to have me, and that I was forced upon you in a difficult situation, I know you had to sacrifice a lot to keep me safe, I know it all, I know that even with all that, you never stopped loving me anyways, thanks for being there for me, and I hope you continue being there for me, for I couldn't ask for a better Dad, and I will try to be the best possible daughter, with love. Emily Walker~
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to ghost_Boat

    bro, Hercules is not incorrect, heracles is just his Greek name, and Hercules is the Roman equivalent.

    So, I had to think outside the box. I had to teach Hydra, that I too, was an impossibility to deal with, a threat so big, they would prioritize saving their resources instead of wasting them on me, I had to become the Heracles of their mythos, I had to teach them, I could slay them.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to Monsterb620
    "You know what's funny about all this?" I chuckled, finally seeing where he was hiding, "That now I know who do I have to kill, Mr. Wrodick," I grinned, reading his name tag.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to atomjack111

    yo pls stop complaining, it's over now, he is a warrior just deal with it.

    Turning around, I aimed my free hand at the person who had shouted and blasted him with a mana arrow, as I ran towards the rest of his group shooting my rifle at them.
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  • Boltz_Theone
    Boltz_Theone2yr
    Replied to I_own_a_Cup_of_Joe

    lol

    Rex first went to a good hotel with a 4-star rating and booked himself a room until the day after tomorrow since he planned to tour the city to experience it during the day as well. After finally booking his room he made his way out to enjoy the nightlife. he went through the biggest street where stalls were set up just like a carnival and all sorts of different things were being sold, from candies and sweets to rare rocks and antiques, it was all there. he slowly made his way through while enjoying a good bucket of fairy floss since he kind of had a massive sweet tooth. he made his way through the stalls with food and headed towards the stalls with rocks and antiques since he might find something worth buying. He soon caught a glimpse of two Metal coats being sold at a price of $3,000 each which was really expensive to him but thinking of the team he was going to build he grit his teeth and spent the money. Professor Oak was generous and paid him a basic wage any assistant would get which help since it added to the $20,000 he received from the system gift pack. after receiving the Metal coats from the happy vendor smiling from ear to ear he chucked them into his inventory when no one was looking.
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