Jackie was turned into a monster. He had spikes sticking out of him and had two diamond wings. He charged at Rose and she screamed and woke up the others.
They formed a circle around him but he wasn't afraid. He slammed the ground, nocking them all back. They got back up and backed away slowly. They didn't want to hurt him but they had to defend there selfs. They ran to the broken castle and found a place to hide from Jackie AKA the monster. They closed the door and pushed against it so Jackie AKA the monster couldn't get inside. They put a bookshelf in front of the door to make a plan of how to escape. They looked around and saw a crack in the wall. Hey Jace?! Rose said. Can you punch that crack to make it bigger? Sure thing ma'am. Ok don't call me that. Sure thing ma'am. JUST PUNCH THE DANG WALL!!! Okay okay. He swung hi arm and BOOM! They eventually got out of the castle. Jackie was on his own. He was living the life. (Of a monster wich I suppose is a bad thing) Like for part 6!!