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Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan

A lot Dragon Ball Z fan-fics are usually thrown away. So I made one, and I did try. I didn't want to make a wack novel so I really tried. first time writing so useful critics would be nice 1 chapter a day, every chapter is 1,000+ words will probably make this summary better one day Also I don't own the Dragon ball story. And I will never have claimed to have owned it NO HAREM. :) Also in the first Volume mc won’t be OP and thats because he is still a child, and his body hasn’t reached its peak.

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Chapter 55

It's been several hours since me and Nala returned to the lookout, and currently everyone except Vegeta, who is alone in the distance, is watching the three humans about to drink some of the improved Ultra Divine Water Nala created.

Yamcha-"Are you sure we won't die from drinking this?"

Nala-"No, you should only feel your body heat up, and while it won't be painful it will definitely feel uncomfortable, so hurry up and drink it!"

Knowing that it won't feel painful, none of them hesitated to drink the cup of water. Once they finished drinking everything, nothing happened but once a minute passed they started sweating a lot.

Krillin-"I don't even feel hot, so why am I sweating so much?"

Tien-"It feels like a whole bunch of ants are crawling inside my body."

Yamcha-"Why does it suddenly smell so bad? Why am I sweating a black liquid?"

Tien-"So am I, it's probably supposed to happen, but it smells like shit."

After a while, they started oozing out black pus from their bodies, and it smelled horrendous. It didn't seem that bad for everyone else, but my 5 senses are far stronger than anyone here, I felt like I was going to throw up from how bad it smelled. Backing away to get some fresh air, I watch as they continue oozing black pus from their body for about 5 minutes before it stopped.

Once they finished, a pink glowing circle appeared around them and it started dissolving the black pus that was on the ground, their clothes, and their bodies. Once everything was cleaned up, Nala went forward to check their bodies and informed them of what happened.

Nala-"Hmm, you guys seem fine. But how do you feel, anything different?"

Yamcha-"I feel stronger, and my 5 senses have improved tremendously."

Krillin-"Yeah, and the control of my ki seemed to have improved as well, what about you Tien? Tien?"

Not hearing getting any response from Tien, Krillin looked over at him and got surprised when he saw Tien's third eye was bleeding.

Krillin-"TIEN, your eye is bleeding."

Tien-"I know, I can finally see through my eye, and everything looks different."

Yamcha-"What do you mean you can see through your third eye? I thought you said it was blind?"

Tien-"It was, that's why I'm as shocked as you that I can now see through it."

Nala-"Drinking the water must have fixed your eye, so what do you see now?"

Tien-"I can see Ki, not ki that has already left your body. But I can see the flow of ki in all of you guys, even when you try to hide it."

Hearing his answer shocked us because being able to see the true strength of your opponent is a huge advantage in battle. Anyways we moved on when Yamcha asked about the black pus coming out of them.

Yamcha-"While that's cool, I want to know what that black smelly pus that came out of us was?"

Nala-"Those would be called impurities, most species I have studied have them stored in the body, and if enough of it is in your body it could seriously affect your health and possibly kill you."

Krillin-"Does that mean we will get any more impurities inside our body?"

Nala-"Nope, that Ultra Divine Water you drank is better than the original. Seeing how you guys are all fine and ok, I shall return home, call me if you guys need any more help."

With that, Nala packs up everything she has and grips an orb before it glows and she disappears. Seeing her leave, Tien, Krillin, Yamcha, Piccolo, and Trunks conversate among themselves, while Vegeta and I are alone minding our own business.

Several hours probably passed again with everyone doing their own things when we sensed Kakarot and Gohans ki, everyone came together just outside the entrance of the lookout and waited for them to walk out. The moment Kakarot and Gohan walked out, everyone but me was surprised to see how they were still in their SSJ transformation and they were suppressing their ki.

Goku-"Hey guys, got any food I'm hungry?"

Hearing his nonchalant response, caused everyone to smile while Vegeta scoffed and walked away. Grabbing some food, we watched as the two Saiyans ate a lot of food, while Krillin explained what happened to them while they were gone. Once they were done eating Kakarot, asked about the power of Cell.

Goku-"So Cell is much stronger than before, but how is my power compared to his?"

Saying that he stood up and started unleashing his ki, shocking everyone because they could tell that wasn't his full power and he is already on par with Vegeta.

Piccolo-"You're about half as strong as his 2nd form."

Powering down, Kakarot put on a disappointed face before replying.

Goku-"That was only 50% of my power, so I could fight evenly with the 2nd form of Cell. it seems like things aren't looking good for us."

Hearing that was only half of his full power, surprised them all while Vegeta threw a tantrum again before flying away in anger.

Sage-"You guys aren't strong enough to win against Cell, you'll have to completely destroy him in one shot otherwise he will just heal back again and be even stronger than before."

Hearing my claim brought a troubled expression to everyone's face before I told someone to go into the HTC.

Sage-"Krillin, Yamcha You two into the HTC next, I want to see how much of an improvement you two can make now."

Not even bothering to try and respond back, they both start following Kami deeper into the lookout to the HTC. Watching them leave, I fly off the lookout to do something enjoyable, hopefully, have some fun with Nala.

Arriving back on the lookout after having slept with Nala for several hours, and doing other stuff, 24 hours have almost passed and I'm curious to see how much of an improvement Krillin and Yamcha made.

Sage-'They better have made some improvements otherwise I'll break their bones for wasting Nala's time.'

Right, when I landed, both Krillin and Yamcha exited the HTC, and although their power doesn't seem to have changed, they are probably suppressing their power. The moment they appear, Tien lets out a voice of shock.

Tien-"WHAT!! You guys have gotten several times more powerful than before, It's absurd!"

Yamcha-"What can I say, I'm a genius."

Krillin-"Well we did have Nala help us, and besides what do you think we did in there, sleep?"

Sage-"Power up, I want to see how much Nala has helped you guys."

Not hesitating, they both start powering up until their max, and while Krillin is a little bit stronger than Yamcha, I can tell that they have improved far more than they ever would have been able to without Nala's help. Powering back down, they look at Tien and provoke him.

Krillin-"You're going to have to train hard if you want to catch up to us Tien."

Yamcha-"Yeah, if you don't you're going to be the weakest among us in the group."

Tien-"Just you wait, I'll show you guys my talent, let's go Piccolo!"

Then both Tien and Piccolo started walking with Kami to the HTC to go and train.

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