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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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The Real Super Saiyan (59)

Broly stood in the middle of the gym facing the mirror.

'It's time' he thought excitedly, waking up Yami.

Broly had waited patiently the last three days, as his body was out of commission he spent his time in the library studying some of the physics behind how his ki stores worked.

He hoped to make adjustments in the future but one could only do so much in three days.

'All right, are you ready?' Yami said, a hint of anticipation present in his voice.

"Yes!" Broly said out loud, unable to contain his excitement.

'Then give me control of the body!' Yami said, palpable greed present in his words.

Broly frowned and his mood dropped.

'Why?'

'How else do you think I'm going to show you?' Yami asked, almost sarcastically.

Broly hesitated for a few moments but the bait in front of his face was just too appealing to resist.

Broly breathed in, calming his entire body, then brought his state of being to his mind, almost meditating. In this mindset, Broly ki felt every movement of ki in his body and control over his physical state dwindled.

'Ack!'

A wave of sharp pain ran through him but this was the third time he experienced it so he reacted much better than last time.

Yami took a deep breath, feeling the air fill up his lungs and softly exhaled.

'Your body is resiting me' Yami said to Broly calmly, hiding any impatience he had.

Broly couldn't help but be cautious, he didn't want Yami to pull a fast one on him.

'You need to relax! I won't be able to show you the methods otherwise, trust me' Yami said delicately, his voice the right tone and the right sound to convince Broly.

Broly sighed out in his mind, "If you're tricking me, I'm going to be pissed" he said doing his best to relax.

Yami chuckled.

'If you get angry it's better for me anyway'

Yami's will moved over Broly, his arms moving high into the air and stance spreading out as he felt the movement of ki inside Broly's body.

'Your ki control is better than I thought' he said praisingly as he brought his arms down.

'Hmph!' Yami grunted as a soft pressure built up at the centre of Broly's body, slowly increasing in size until...

FSH!

A heavy yellow aura appeared around Broly, rotating around his body menacingly, like a tornado with him at the centre. Broly watched captivated, wondering what Yami was doing.

The yellow aura around Broly swirled green, his ki now being infused with it and evolving the aura, merging together.

"KYAH!" Yami shouted out loud as the aura around him burst, waves of green ki scattering around his body revealing his new form.

Broly was in awe as he saw himself with once again since the incident at the tournament he was 8'10, a ridiculous height but the ship was built with him as a guide so he somehow managed to get around. Broly's muscles had grown significantly larger, the level of pronouncement the same, only the size grew to match Broly's height, the kilograms of heavy meat sitting firmly on his body. Broly's legs had also gotten bigger, the bulges on his thighs and the thickness of his calves also growing as more and more compact muscle developed. Broly's tail was neatly wrapped around his waist, laying under the sash he was wearing.

Broly was a handsome man, his eyebrows and skin complementing each other gracefully, Broly's eyes were also a slender striking shape, ensuring that if he cracked a sudden glare, the recipient would be intimidated. The only flaw on his face, the metaphorical chink in his armour, was that his nose was a strange shape appearing like a whistle.

This was actually another genetic advantage Broly had obtained allowing air to be suddenly and quickly brought in and out of his body.

Yami stared at the mirror mesmerized by Broly's appearance.

'I'm only attracted to women' Broly said breaking Yami out of his daze.

Yami ignored Broly's comment and moved Broly's arms, even more, exploring Broly's range of movement.

'Your range is insane, a tool you haven't been properly abusing' Yami said, looking at Broly's wingspan.

'Why is my hair yellow?' Broly asked as he saw it rise into the air.

Broly wasn't that surprised as a few months ago his spine was forcefully lengthened, his hair turning blonde seemed mellow by comparison.

Yami smirked.

"This is the Super Saiyan form I was telling you about!" he said proudly.

'The one that increases your strength by 50? But it only turned my hair yellow!' Broly rebutted in protest, unable to believe that by changing his hair colour his strength had gone up so dramatically.

'Check your ki channels' Yami said, pride still present as ever in his voice.

Broly focused on the movements of his ki in his body, even at the back of his mind still sensing a faint connection between him and his energy.

'HUH!'

Broly exclaimed as his ki moved around his body much faster and smoother than before, the strain and pressure on him vastly decreased.

Even the very properties of the ki had vastly changed, for one his ki which was already extremely dense was able to compress even further becoming much more destructive. Another thing was that his ki was much more stable, almost as if off all the excess energy responsible for the disruptive nature was leaking off.

'My hair!'

The idea clicked in Broly's mind like a puzzle piece now understanding what was happening.

His hair like a safety valve, let out all the unnecessary ki in his body, that meant that his hair was also responsible for the aura that appeared around him, reforming the atmosphere near him.

"You really take the fun out of it when you try to break down and explain everything," Yami said to Broly who was mind was racing around his body, watching the processes happen.

'Even the ki inside my guards are changing!' Broly said ignoring Yami.

The ki inside Broly's guards also compressed, if it was a mighty ocean before it was a restless lake now.

'At least I don't have to worry about them exploding before I make adjustments' Broly thought happily.

Yami grunted again and the yellow aura expanded again, using all the ki in Broly's body to power himself up, the aura around him magnifying.

'In this current state you strength is roughly 35 times higher than base, you'll have to master it to reach the 50 times multiplier' Yami said to Broly, examining his body.

'Who in the universe is strong enough to compete with me in this state?' Broly asked, wondering what chance his enemies had.

'You'd be surprised, just because you can't see it doesn't mean there aren't people plotting and scheming against you,' Yami said warningly.

'How does it even work?' Broly asked, ignoring Yami.

Yami smiled knowingly, his proud character giving a cold menacing look to the usually cheery and relaxed Broly.

"This form is much more efficient than your base form, initially it would need a suitable trigger, large power level and prepared body but you are a walking cheat code. Whether you realise it or not, as a berserker you have built-in anger issues, your power level is constantly increasing because of that bug in your ki and your body is the finest I've ever seen" Yami declared, stating facts.

'A bug in my ki? What do you mean?' Broly asked, even more confused.

Yami was silent before sighing out loud.

'For a guy who's supposed to be really smart, you're super slow' Yami said.

"Enough talking! Let's get to learning some techniques!" Yami declared, green ki rising at his fingertips.

[Storyteller: Broly is a Super Saiyan? Already? If I do some quick calculations...]

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[Storyteller: Five hundred and sixty million! At the age of 17! Who on earth can stand on the same ground as Broly? Make sure you come back and read the next chapter to find out! Dragon Ball Revised!]

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