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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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Pushing It (110)

Queen Vegeta ran towards Broly, knowing by now that jumping at him was a wasted effort.

Broly watched her with peeled eyes as he waited for her to attack.

But she didn't.

'A grab?'

Broly pushed his palm out, wanting to swat her away from him but she moved quickly, rolling onto his massive arm and smacking her foot into the side of his head.

Queen Vegeta waited for a split second and quickly registered that Broly hadn't moved from her impact it all. She utilised the stun from this attack and manoeuvred around his back, driving an elbow past his hair onto the top of his head.

Broly winced as he felt the hit but resisted the urge to grip the spot, knowing that if he did, he would be opening himself up even further.

'That was a really bad first move'

Queen Vegeta acted as if she already knew Broly's offence and initiated the perfect counter for it, leaving her in a really good position.

Broly jumped backwards, trying to use his huge back to smash into her.

She instantly veered left.

Broly caught himself quickly, just in time to notice a flying leg moving to his face, he didn't hesitate and grabbed it.

Queen Vegeta wasted no time and hopped up, leaning forward and charging a ball of ki in her palm, aiming to slap Broly's face with it.

Broly's brain worked quickly. One of his hands were occupied and he could only use his other to attack or defend. If he attacked, Queen Vegeta could just release the ball and it would smack his face, creating a smokescreen that would put him in a bad spot or he could grab her arm to stop the slap but even then she could still release her ki and hit him.

An idea flashed through Broly's mind.

He opened his mouth, revealing two cleanly stacked rows of pearly white teeth and a soft pink tongue. A small beam of ki began to grow, flying straight from his body and into the air in front of him.

Queen Vegeta's eyes expanded.

She quickly brought her palm down, slapping the ball against Broly's shoulder, making an imprint, and brought her knee in, hitting Broly's side and dodging the beam that streaked past her.

"Clever," Broly complimented as he wrapped his other arm around Queen Vegeta's back, pressing her against his body.

Panic was written plain as day on her face as Broly's arms shifted, bringing her into a tight bear hug, her scowling face a few inches from his.

"PUTU!"

She spat on him.

Broly's expression cracked like a broken mirror, becoming genuinely angry for the first time he could remember.

"ACK!"

Broly's arms squeezed hard on her back, wanting desperately to meet with his chest but obstructed by the meat layer in between them. Broly's face was just a few inches away from Queen Vegeta's supple breasts but he was not in the headspace to find it enjoyable, angered by the profound insult.

He released her and back dashed, allowing her to regain her footing.

DUNK!

Broly's foot found Queen Vegeta's chin as he powerfully kicked upwards her high in the air. Before she could hit the ceiling Broly pulled her leg down, forcing her back to her feet and delivered a crunching superman punch to the side of her face, knocking her to one side and then followed up with a kick that smashed into the side of her chest, forcing her to bounce off the opposite wall.

Queen Vegeta fell back, trying to shake off her dizziness while Broly took short steps towards her, using his thumb to scrape off her spit.

"Do you still think you're stronger than me?" he said, a hint of satisfaction in his voice.

"F-FFFFF"

Queen Vegeta stuttered, unable to regain her breath.

Broly realised that he had been much too lenient with the Queen, any respect or appreciation she had for him rescuing her had seemingly worn off, returning to her prideful and arrogant nature.

It appeared she needed to be shown who was in charge around here.

He listened intently, wanting to catch anything she muttered.

"Fuck you!" she forced out, rushing him with her remaining energy.

Broly didn't even blink pushing out a small ki ball from his extended palm.

Boom!

The ki ball immediately arrived at Queen Vegeta's abdomen, exploding on impact, making her bounce off the wall again and face down onto the hard flow.

'Hopefully, this will be the last time' Broly thought, heaving her limp body onto his shoulder.

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'Breathe in....'

Whoooosh!

'Breathe out....'

Fwooooosh!

'Hmph!'

Dark green energy sparked around Broly as his hair rose, his eyes turning from a solid black to violent yellow.

'Tch!'

Broly exhaled sharply as his body relaxed once again.

He had noticed that for every state his Saiyan body was in, there would be a change in either the arrangement or quality of his ki, he had noticed that for the Great Ape transformation, it wasn't the process of turning into a monkey that was responsible for the increase in power, it was actually the arrangement of his ki.

'Why is it so serious though?'

Broly felt that whenever he wanted to tap into a transformation his body would become tense and his heart rate would quicken, his emotions would rile up and his thirst for battle would rise again. It was only after several minutes had passed he would calm down and be able to move around cooly.

'The transformations are for fight or flight responses, I can't just force them out because I want to'

Well, he could but he would just be in the mood to tear everything down around him.

An idea came up in Broly's mind.

'If that's the case then.... and it would...'

It was more than a bit risky but if it worked than he could gain a lot and even help Queen Vegeta make some breakthroughs in the process.

'After this, I'll call it even' he decided, making the risky move.

(A few hours later)

"Queen Vegeta!"

Queen Vegeta opened her eyes immediately, responding harshly to her name being called.

"What?" she said, still waking up, responding bluntly.

"You've been sleeping for over 12 hours now! Are we going to spar or not?" Broly said passionately, trying his best to sound frustrated.

'Sleeping? It was a dream?'

She still remembered the fight they had in the gym and could swear that her jaw was still hurting.

Broly saw Queen Vegeta's confused face and smiled internally, knowing that his plan was working.

"You know what? It's fine, forget that-"

"No it's fine," Queen Vegeta interrupted.

"We can spar after lunch," she said slowly, trying to remember what happened before her dream.

"Dinner," Broly said, unable to stop a scheming smile from coming onto his face.

Way late chapter

I had maths homework due for tomorrow

Trigonometry is easy, Probability is hard

On another note, are there any other Dragon Ball novels worth looking at?

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