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Dragon Ball Revised

In an alternate timeline where Paragus reacts more passionately to Broly's execution, he and his friends band together and flee Planet Vegeta! What will this do to the timeline? How will the change in upbringing affect Broly? Find out in Dragon Ball Revised! https://www.patreon.com/EveryLittleHelps - Please consider tipping if you like the novel, I really appreciate it The Fanfiction is written so that even if you are not a fan of Dragon Ball you can still understand what is happening. DISCLAIMER: Broly isn't the main focus until chapter 40! Broly is the main character but there are 40 chapters worth of backstory! Broly however will still be doing Broly things! Also! There are many OC's! The main cast of the story will be made up of the main character in the anime and manga but more than a few OC supporting characters will be introduced! Bare with the wait! DISCLAIMER PART 2!!!: I am a Broly fan as much as the rest of you so I can assure you that Broly will be wiping the floor with the frost demons and stomping his enemies into the dirt, however! My Broly will not a cruel and heartless MC that kills his enemies excessively. Broly, by all means, seeks peace but rest assured there is no shortage of people for him to overcome. Announcement: This novel is not dropped but currently under reconstruction I didn't like the trajectory the story was following so changed it, if some of the plot around the 120-140 chapters seems jumpy, this is why.

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#DRAGON

He Will Kill Who? (125)

Whis double-tapped his wand and the scenery around him changed, transporting him to a small planet with a purple sky and one great temple built in the centre.

'I better get on with my investigation,' he thought, rubbing his stomach that was packed full.

In front of the temple was a long bridge that arched over a river, several shrubs of fruit and vegetables sprouting from the dry land as fish swam in the water coyly.

The temple was a deceptively big creation, it had several towers that were linked by floating staircases to flying landmasses. The building on the ground was tall in the centre but smoothed out into a long chain.

Whis walked at a relaxed pace, remembering the peculiar resident of this planet.

He looked at the closed entrance gate, realising that he hadn't booked an appointment.

'Oh well'

He double-tapped his staff and teleported inside of the temple.

"What do you want"

A chubby purple-skinned man inside some kind of floating cauldron hovered toward Whis, his expression troubled.

Several attendants identical to him peeked out from the corners of the room, they were told to leave Zuno alone but curiosity had gotten the better of them.

"You knew I was coming?" Whis said slightly surprised.

"I know everything! Now, what do you want? You just being here increases my chance of death by 40 per cent," Zuno said, somewhere between scared and annoyed.

"I've come to see what you know about the Legendary Super Saiyan," Whis said, his tone involuntarily coming out as indifferent.

"Legendary Super Saiyan? Hmmm," Master Zuno said thinking, sorting through his knowledge.

"Ok, the Legendary Super Saiyan is a terrifying existence that occurs once every thousand years, he or she is a freakishly powerful being that when mature can destroy galaxies and even universes with the wave of a hand," Zuno said stoically.

'That sounds like someone that's definitely at God of Destruction level'

"Who is the Legendary Super Saiyan this millennia?" Whis asked, intrigued.

"Not so fast, I gave you the first question out of respect, if you want more answers it is going to cost you, and don't even think about rewinding time because my knowledge is multiversal," Zuno said, his eyes narrowing.

Whis raised an eyebrow but eventually sighed.

"What do you want?"

"A kiss," Zuno said, his face incredibly serious.

Whis' eyes narrowed.

This matter was incredibly serious and could not be taken lightly.

"How many questions will a kiss get me?"

"One, like everyone else," Zuno said, bargaining.

"I see," Whis said, in deep contemplation.

Without wasting time he tapped his staff twice on the temple floor.

Seemingly from thin air, a tall blue-skinned woman came appeared, wearing clothes and holding a staff similar to Whis.

"Vados, please kiss the man," Whis said, his face very serious.

"Forgive me for asking but for what reason?" Vados said, more upset that she was summoned.

"Lord Champa's life is on the line," Whis said, his face turning dark.

Vados' face fell and she didn't hesitate, walking towards the purple-skinned man a pecking him, placing her soft blue lips on his cheek.

Zuno's face lit up like a Christmas tree as he looked back up at the pretty woman he looked down on him with a serious expression.

"AHEM!" he said, clearing his throat.

"The Legendary Super Saiyan in this timeline is a peculiar fellow named Broly, his father and a few friends escaped Planet Vegeta and grew up on Planet Sythis, ironically, home to Tuffles which his race had driven there in the first place," Zuno said quickly.

"And he wants to kill Champa?" Vados said, looking back at Whis.

"More like he will, the Oracle Fish predicted it," Whis said, thinking deeply.

"Let's kill him then," Vados said, deciding quickly.

"It won't be that simple," Zuno interrupted.

"The Legendary Super Saiyan is a freak among freaks, throughout history, they have only died either by old age or from the collective efforts of countless people on many planets," Zuno said wisely.

"If you approached him now, he would only get more powerful and most likely kill Lord Champa sooner," Zuno interrupted.

"So what do we do?" Whis said.

"Simple, in a few years he will contract the Super Heart Virus, kill him then," Zuno said, providing a solution to his problem.

Whis and Vados were intelligent enough to figure out what Zuno meant by this.

"Where is he now? I'll have to place him under surveillance," Whis said, carefully.

Zuno opened his mouth, about to ask for another kiss but decided against it, a reality without him quickly being generated in the multiverse.

"He's flying through space, not necessarily with a destination but my best guess as that he's heading to Planet Sythis soon," Zuno said, sweating under the heated gaze of the Angels.

Vados and Whis looked back at each other nodded and tapped their staffs simultaneously, disappearing without a trace.

Zuno exhaled sharply, happy that he got to live another day.

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Broly opened his eyes lazily, his heart full of happiness as he felt a familiar and comfortable weight on him.

Hanasia had elected to use him as a bed and despite growing to about 7 feet under the repetitive use of Super Saiyan grade 3.

She still fit snugly on Broly's huge 9-foot body. She stirred a bit, wriggling on Broly who had just got up.

"You really did whatever you wanted yesterday," she said, feeling her lower abdomen which was bloated, running her hands of the bruises on her ass and legs.

"You asked for everything I had so I gave you everything I had," Broly said, feeling an emptiness in his balls that was becoming more common.

"I don't believe you, surely the Legendary Super Saiyan has more in the tank," she said, gripping his power pole.

"No can do, I'm out of commission for at least the next 3 hours," Broly said, moving his ki in his body.

"Only three hours!?"

"I can't let my little cumslut go without dick for too long can I?"

"Don't call me that," she said, quietly, tucking under his chin.

"Forty-Seven times!" Broly cackled, laughing loudly as he embraced her.

"And the face you made! Even if I become a vegetable I don't think I could forget it"

"I have no idea what you're talking about," Hanasia said, feigning ignorance.

"Let me remind you"

Just above Broly's head, an electronic screen fell down, depicting Hanasia with hands pressed down on his abs while he thrust into her, forcing her tongue out and making her eyes rolled back.

The GIF played repeatedly to Hanasia's horror, making her face bright red with shame.

"You didn't!"

"I did"

"I hate you"

"I love you"

Her face became even redder seeing Broly's lovesick expression as he laid eyes on her.

It was very obvious to her that he wasn't lying.

She remained quiet but cuddled him, hugging him tightly as he returned the hug, their warmth spreading onto each other.

"Where to now?" she whispered softly.

"I'm getting a bit homesick, I'll introduce you to my family," he said, a long smile on his face.

So

I have an idea

It might spoil the story if I say early but I think it's a really good idea, although the timeline might get rearranged a bit

Also 300 power stones?

Scammers!

Thank you for reading

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