ManagerS
damn good op mc but 10 stronger villens in the futur harem good not stupid girls that spread their legs und say cuss you too strong for one woman (pls let him now the girls first befor he f,,,s damn to nirvana) slow paced and not too fast with his villens ( don`t kill them off let them grow and learn then you will have nice villen) goold luck with your fic and don`t late haters influce you
The story and characters are good although having better progress with the romance might make it better.The author does add an unessary character but I do see where the author is coming from.Although the civilization he added is not bad and made me wonder where he was going with it, he could do somthing to make it a bit more uniqe and unlike other underwater civilizations.Putting all the bad and good aside, it is a great story and I can't wait to see where it is headed.👍
its good..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................