The story and characters are good although having better progress with the romance might make it better.The author does add an unessary character but I do see where the author is coming from.Although the civilization he added is not bad and made me wonder where he was going with it, he could do somthing to make it a bit more uniqe and unlike other underwater civilizations.Putting all the bad and good aside, it is a great story and I can't wait to see where it is headed.đ
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