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Well done Nima, I love this story and I don’t want to stop reading, I definitely keep reading as you post more 🙃It is really creative 🦋Totally, it’s amazing like you . I honestly think that is one of the best stories I’ve read so far …. Everything about is well and unique ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I discovered this from a friend's Instagram story, and when I started reading it, I didn't want to stop. I hope there will be a constant update. I wish you the best with it and I'm looking forward to the future chapters. Even though few mistakes are visible, it is understandable for your first novel. There are a lot of great things that I wanna mention but I don't want to spoiler tag this.
I got introduced to this novel from your insta story. First of all your character design, development is great it's just your writing quality which I can definitely see it being improved in the second chapter which shows that you're getting better and better. Keep it up. I'll follow if it does update regularly.
I can't help but look forward to how this novel will turn out. I'm pretty sure it will turn out to be a good novel with enough polishing, ignoring the fact that Arthur posseses a father with a Chinese name and a mother with a Western name.. and the other fact that his parents have the same last name, the rest was great, especially the ending. (talking about chapter 1)