Reviews of Carnage in Another World

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I'm writing this review to let the readers now that I already know there is much that I can improve on and I would like you guys I've been reading my book this far if you see anything they can be improved upon please do not hesitate to leave a comment or review both are welcome at all times also don't forget to vote with those power stones if I can get my book into the top 200 ranking by my birthday on January 26th 2020 I will release a mass release thank you for reading my book so far and I hope you guys enjoyed in the future ** shamelessly giving myself 4 stars

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The writing Quality is poor with bad sentence strukture and a lot of spelling mistkes. Most likely the author doesn´t have an Editor. The updates are stable though there has not been enough time to say for certain. The Story devellops fast but does not seem to have any deeps. The caracters are plain stupid. There is basicly no reason for most choices made, exept otherwith the plot doesn´t hapen… The protagonist doesn´t seem to have any deep emotions. He behaves like he´s just playing a game with himself as Avatar. The world exists as we know because of some big Dumps of exposition