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While the quality of writing is lacking a bit, the development of the story is rather nice. I have some questions in regards to how he ended up in a cave in the beginning, but I feel it may be revealed later. The main character seems to be ok with his sudden shift of environments, but that might just be his character? In any case, I do think this story has potential so keep it up!

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Carnage in Another World

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Thank you for the review