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The writing Quality is poor with bad sentence strukture and a lot of spelling mistkes. Most likely the author doesn´t have an Editor. The updates are stable though there has not been enough time to say for certain. The Story devellops fast but does not seem to have any deeps. The caracters are plain stupid. There is basicly no reason for most choices made, exept otherwith the plot doesn´t hapen… The protagonist doesn´t seem to have any deep emotions. He behaves like he´s just playing a game with himself as Avatar. The world exists as we know because of some big Dumps of exposition

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Carnage in Another World

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