OrangePanther
The chapters are great, not any grammatical errors I could find(yet). Also, the fic is situated in the world of westros, a complicated and beautiful world and the MC is captain, a complicated character. I am excited to see what this leads to, by the tags, I am hoping to see a beautiful and complex story. Recommend it and good luck author-san!
I fell asleep reading this. If you read it dont come in expecting it to be action packed and with a MC who has ambition and a goal. Captain America is just thereโฆ.while things happen around him. You wouldnt know he was captain america if he wasnt wearing red white and blue 24/7 and talking about how he misses peggy all the time, otherwise youd think you were following the story POV of some background character.
lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.
Seriously one of the handful of non-garbage fanfics out here, which Iโm sadly guilty of. People who criticize the epistolary style of writing must have never read real books before, because itโs nothing new. My only gripe is having to find out you were using the book when I kept imagining everything in its tv format for most of the story. This was a joy to read.