Average at best, so many things he did and so many things happened but the result is that it's just the same in the canon, what's the point of getting reincarnated and almost half of the story currently dedicated to his training and mastering jutsus and he can't change a damn thing in the story to makes this more interesting. Felt like the story will stay the same him being below the the OG strong characters and he will do nothing about it but hide and flaunts his fuckin careful, cowardly, and "i dont want relationships in this ninja world because it can get me killed" nature. I bet the story will go the same as the canon but we will have the MC training and training again and again and still find himself inferior of the strong OG characters, so author can have the reason to continue doing this routine again and again until this story goes from outer space. 🤷‍♂️

THAT'S THE GOAL!! TO BE AT THE TOP! what's so hard for that to understand? you keep saying it's ambition, it's only an ambition if he didn't reach it but he's the MC of the story for sure he will become the strongest nen user, just because he didn't said it directly it doesn't mean he didn't have a goal. What's your dream or ambition? to be the strongest in the world. that's a goal right? if you successfully become one but if you didn't then it's only an ambition, see the simple logic?

First of all, i didn't said they should be like Akatsuki, what i said is that they should have a goal instead of doing anything like in the original because the author said they should be a Troupe like? so what's the real Phantom Troupe? doing anything they like, killing innocents, for money, for everything. They lacked the ideology, they're just a group of criminals who doesn't care about what they do and the founding members are loyal to their leader, simple as that. Second, about the things you said for the incoming arcs, remember this is still 12 yrs ago prior to the Yorknew City Arc considering this is a Phantom Troupe centric fanfic the author can't just do a big timeskip because that will not make sense, so the incoming arcs like Yorknew and Chimera will be in much later part of the novel.

I understand your point too but this is fanfiction, well although yours is technically a fanfiction aside from having adding an OC, what's the difference between the original story and your work? I know Troupe is Troupe if they act like Troupe but wouldn't that be repetitive? because you said they need to be Troupe, so that means you're just going to repeat what they did in the original story with just a little bit of twist that MC is part of the group and a vice leader. You know since this 12 yrs before the plot in Yorknew City, there's just so much potential in your work. This is just my personal opinion brother, i still appreciate your work keep it up!

I thought this would be more interesting Phantom Troupe than the original one. Looks like they're just another group takes everything they want and want nothing taken away from them. Personally, i think this would be more interesting if they have an agenda like Akatsuki and other villain groups, probably the only thing i can expect in this story is about all killing, stealing, killing and stealing again until they reach the main plot of the OG story. Welp, each to their own i guess.

a minor leaguer in his last life looking forward to a high schooler to teach him about pitching lol

Well it's possible to have 5 pitchers in a team but the point is that they must all be first string players (the main team). That's why i said earlier aside from there's too many pitchers, there's also only 3 slots left for the first string. That's why it's hard to make a great DNA fanfiction especially a self insert pitcher since the team has only limited slots unless you want make it in another era like Rei same year with Yuuki, Chris and others (the 3rd years in original) or Rei same with Miyuki or Rei with another team. Adding a pitcher in the same year with Sawamura and Furuya will make the Seidou team full of pitchers but can't use all of them. Sawamura, Rei, Kawakami, Tanba (ace) and Furuya that's 5 pitchers and i don't know how will you distribute the playing time.

lol Seidou without Sawamura is like One piece without Luffy, he's the MC for a reason and their future ace, him not playing competitive for his whole first year means slower progression, no yips arc results into a weaker Sawamura. Well, it's your story man, your story your choice.

i mean you have no choice there since Miyuki will be the one who will be the main catcher. Chris is already injured and won't play in his last year, so i don't know how can you make a battery with him, the only time Rei can make battery with Chris are games in friendly matches or training. Unless you make Chris never got injured but that will make Miyuki as a reserve catcher since the main catcher can be only one. Also there's a thing about the first string, at the moment there are only 3 slots left originally that was taken by Sawamura, Furuya and Haruichi but since Rei (MC) is in Seidou you need to make an adjustment there. P.S Chris isn't in first string since he is injured.

then most likely it will be a mess since there's too many pitchers and also making a battery with Chris it means that Sawamura will practice with other catcher. There are only 3 catchers that are good catchers right now, they are Chris, Miyuki and Miyauchi and with 5 pitchers Rei, Sawamura, Furuya, Kawakami and Tanba i don't know how will you make it work. There's also Ono but Ono only improved after the Chris retired, that gave him opportunity to train with Sawamura that's why he's able to catch Sawamura and Furuya pitches in his 2nd year.

First, may i know what year did Rei join Seidou? i mean is he in the same year as Miyuki and Kuramochi or same as Sawamura and Furuya? because Chris only played during his first year and second year in Seidou after that he got injured.

lol Steve not doing anything about mycah's death is BS, Steve is not a saint but he was good man so him not doing anything and forgetting about mycah's death was big BS. Looks like these so called "some questionable, some noble, etc actions or decisions" will be nonsense forced plots that will forcibly portray a different Steve.

oohhhhh don't give us hope....

This is a Peaky Blinders fanfiction, just because he has "Bones of Death" doesn't mean the author wants to turn this into an anime where he can be Light Yagami. There's a reason why "Bones of Death" isn't being used for ridiculous things like weapons or artifacts from anime world because this is a Peaky Blinders fanfiction.

Fortunately, him deciding to leave Emily for war really worked so well. I'm glad you decided to create your own mafia family which consists of former veteran soldiers (a really nice idea and it was completely reasonable). Looking forward to the reunion of the two(Emily and Victor), i expect wholesome moments about his own mafia family and i hope they will be given more exposure (like there's distinct rankings and more side characters, not like only Artie and Oscar are introduced then the rest of the members are disregarded) since Peaky Blinders wasn't all about Thomas Shelby but it was all about The Shelby family and the Peaky Blinders itself.

glad to hear that, i just observed because his sins was ignored because there's no monologue about him using Trask only for his talents. Thank you for reminder!

he's kinda being a hypocrite here, trask leading him to "right path" was so forced, i love how wholesome he is and how he is clear about what's right and wrong, he even decided to drop bombs on japan just to avoid the bigger casualties possible but him deciding to think about leading trask on the "right path" is absurd, man's already doing experiments on mutants considering the robots (sentinels) were done and all those mutants who were experimented on just being ignored for the sake of having a scientist interested on x-gene. I get that trask will die but still deliberately acting like the dude is not a sinner just doesn't feel good considering how he is so pressed about making the world better.

i thought you are serious because it is already april 2 in my country, hopefully you don't drop this one because it is nice to see a peaky blinder fanfic here in WN.

First of all, I'm not talking about his sentiments about his new family, i was talking how forced the plot was and did you even read the prologue. He died when he was 15 years old, still a kid, he didn't even forget the "family" he had when he was still Shin, even though he didn't experience a complete family and his father left him with debts still he loved his family. Now he was reborn as Yahiko, at first he struggled but eventually accepted his new life with loving parents and this goes on for 8 years, now tell me a kid who lacks parental love and forced to work odd jobs at such a young age and be reborn as yahiko with loving parents and for 8 years, you expect him to not have a feelings for his new parents? LOL