first Novel/questions

to people who wants to know what kind of novel I created during my depression!? well, here ya go!

(note* questions first!)

am I going to keep writing on this platform or a different platform?:

: Yes, I plan to continue this no matter what, I want my story to be known by all.

your writing from the start was redundant or stupid

: Yes I know they look stupid and I plan to change it the moment I wrote it, they will be updated but if I update them then the novel will come to a halt for the time and I don't want that, so when I'm in school I'll try to change every single bit, and I plan to put it as close to the original and what I wrote this day,

do you wish to continue with writing novels or will you quit if you became successful?

: Yes, a big Yes!, this novel was created solely by me and that was the original novel when I was in depressed on my highschool life./ late message, I'll continue

what kind was your Original novel? and tell us about it

: it was as dark as possible, Kirin was a noble still today but his name was Kirin Helios, and he created a multitude of clones capable of destroying a country, the 3 races united in destroying the Demon kingdom but they didn't succeed, Kirin created a clone that alone is capable of destroying the world, she was a little girl with an innocent smile but a wicked being, Parva Helios, Parva was the epitome of death, the grim reaper, she was a monster that can absolutely kill a person with an innocent smile, although Kirin succeeded in his creation he didn't survive by it, Parva killed her own creator and the winged beast took action imprisoning the little demon but in Kirin's vision he was defeated, the goddesses didn't favor Kirin and in return punished him in eternal suffering, Immortality, if he didn't destroy his creation in a 100 years then Kirin will have to suffer eternal torture with his immortality, kirin's soul was halved and created a new Kirin, reborn but with an emotionless face, he doesn't understand why he's like that so he created a golem named Pixelyte, Pixelyte was a stone golem loyal to Kirin but Humans reffered to it as a monster and destroyed his creation, Kirin, without any emotions didn't bother but his heart pained, he knew how painfull seeing his loved creation die so he took a bit of essence and created a pure golem but what he took was actually 1/4 of Parva's essence, Kirin's ability wasn't Corrupted but Life, an unknown ability to all, he took the life force of others including Parva's essence that was lingering, Mana didn't exist until much later, Mana was known as a rare item but was only produced if a crystal and blood condensed for 5 years mixed, he needed a mana crystal to create his golem and was able to find one after 6 months, he created Pixelyte, a humanoid golem with the same emotionless face as Kirin, Kirin Died of malnutrition right after a day giving birth to Pixelyte, meanwhile Pixelyte, having no master journeyed to find a new one but was immediately stopped, he was a golem that doesn't need to eat but close to human but there's one problem, without a master he wasn't able to move, he stayed in his spot for tens of years, later Kirin Sakuraba, an other worlder, with the same abilities as Pixelyte's old master, followed him ti'll he die, Kirin was a corrupted, with the same ability as the current Kirin Aiha today, Bone-blood abilities capable of incapacitating millions and producing life to golems and humans alike, although Kirin wasn't welcome to any race or nation, because the symbol and name "Kirin" was a symbol of death, the harbinger of death, the diamond in his eye was proof that he was the "Kirin" they know but was scared to make a move, later on, Kirin creates another body but this was only meant for him, he created this golem body with his blood and sweat, while convincing that he isn't an evil entity to the mass, later on he produced another golem but unlike Pixelyte, this golem has the memories of another world, her real name was Yuno, giving her the name Yuno Aiha, this Golem was different to Pixelyte, she had skills unknown to all later on being helpful to him, this created the music era, an ability which can buff or attack with the magic of voice, songs. he was successful to his mission but later on, perished, but after a few months comes back with the clone he created for Himself, his name is Kirin, but with no surname, he took Yuno's surname and took the name Kirin Aiha, he would create dozens of creation with the sole purpose of protecting the whole world of Laplace, he later created golems with the power of song and the ability to adapt, Yin mei(daisy) and Naoya respectively, Yuno died later on being assassinated by the order of the Human kingdom, the creation Kirin Made, angry, attempted to assassinate the King, it was successful but it bit him back being the most wanted person in the world, Kirin, later on, found 4 more Mana crystals, this was used to teleport them to different dimension. after creating his most perfect creation Liliya Roza, she had the ability to heal and sing, with the magic of Mana with her she was able to defend but was dragged with Naoya and Pixelyte. they used the dimension gate to escape but Daisy stayed. Pixelyte made a compromise, they can't survive without Pixelyte and Naoya had the power to adapt to any situation, due to Kirin dying yet again, Pixelyte was again another stone, Naoya took Pixelyte's ability, the body Pixelyte was in was turned to dust and Naoya now has everything he had, from memories to emotion and abilities to fight, although now he was the exact copy of Pixelyte, only smarter, Liliya cried in tears after seeing another die but moved on, the world they were in was earth, they lived in the year 1827, Naoya became a teacher and Liliya assisted, after a few years, Daisy found them cuddled in a little house, Daisy brought them back to their own dimension but Liliya and Naoya saw what the Original Kirin created, Parva... all of the creations Kirin made tried to kill Parva but was unable to, one by one they died, Liliya and Naoya was the 2 strongest creation Kirin Aiha made, so they were sure that they will kill her but Liliya had crumbled in fear. a ghost of Kirin Aiha and Sakuraba was visible in the distance, the two created a barrier possible of encasing anyone, a barrier that can let anything in but not out, but the two said they can only hold it for 1 day, and they have been both at it for 15 Hours, Liliya now saw the determination of the two and strengthened her will to destroy. their last order, by the two Kirin's, clone of the original

"Please... Destroy our old creation... set us free...".

Liliya and Naoya dashed in in an attempt to finally defeat Parva, they were successful but they were a second too late, Kirin's order by the goddesses was defeat Parva by the hundredth year, Kirin's Punishment was inevitable the two Kirin disappeared without a trace with a smile on their face, Daisy was at a loss of words, Naoya was disappointed at himself but Liliya was crying, she was the most devastated by the three, they all survived except their creator, the one who they loved, Liliya was bedridden for 2 years and later now a leader of a platoon, Naoya as well, Daisy is now a scientist in research of Life production and was successful but didn't continue. the three of them lived peacefully after but with a hole on their heart.

anyway, aux chapter updated, if there's any part from the first novel that you like? then tell me which part, or if you want I'll get that into a novel here but one problem... I lost it on my first laptop... oh well!. there are also parts that seems off or has no information in them then please be my guest to point them out, I wanted it to be as short as possible so it might be a really short story.