Ariel_x
For starters, I've read a lot of stories here on Webnovel, but I would like to say this is one of the better ones when it comes to descriptions. The grammar and punctuation is well done with little-to-no errors. As for the characters, Lena seems to have been stuck in between a rock and a hard place. I'm interested to see how this how this turns out for her. This is a well-written story, and one you should check out!
Wow. Just reading the synopsis made me fall in love with this story already. I was intrigued. It was clear to see that it was not ill-fate with their marriage because the male lead was not as bad as they described. As I read through the first few chapters, I can say that this story has the potential to excel. There are little to no g-errors and the storyline is intriguing. Keep up the good work, author!
A phenomenal novel. I am not sure how much effort went into the first chapter but it was really well done. Not too long yet it gave all the information needed to keep me hooked. I really felt myself feeling all sorts of emotions while reading specially my anger towards the uncle and aunt in the beginning. There's a fair bit of mystery in this novel so I guess I'll have to keep reading to get my questions answered. Great read!
Hi, author. I would like to say I enjoy your story. XD ML seems to be shrouded in mystery and it makes me want to know about him. Lena is also quite likable. But what left an impression on me is the interaction between the two leads. I only have word to describe them. Cute hahaha. Keep up the good work. Happy writing. <3
The writing is alright, and there are a few grammatical errors here and there. I would say the author also does a good job of describing characters and giving backstories. Not sure how I feel about the male and female leads yet. The male lead is giving me very creepy vibes but I'm hoping it gets better in the upcoming chapters.