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histo_shizuka

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時は、待たない。 Knowledge is power and science is magic. <3

2022-05-05 JoinedUnited States
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    The synopsis catches your attention quickly, while the story continues to keep your interest chapter to chapter. This author's writing style is unique, and although there is small grammar errors here and there, the charm of the story shines through. Deff worth a read.

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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    Just wanted to say, Zero is hands down my favorite. Leave my boy alone. :) Besides some grammar and punctuation issues, this story has a lot of potential. The plot is interesting, the characters are diverse (Hello, Dina <3), and the world building is intriguing. I would definitely give it a read!

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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    Ch 9  Chapter Six- W1: How to snag yourself a god’s heart (2)
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Coincidence or...? Hmmmm

    'Zero, do these guys have a thing for names starting with J? Johnson, Jessica, Jason, J, J, J, even the target is Jack! What is this?!'
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Poor guy lmao

    "Host please concentrate" zero said with the same monotone voice
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    Ch 8 Chapter Five- W1: How to snag yourself a god’s heart (1)  
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    "Okay~ Okay~"
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    Talk about fate screwing with you!

    There was also this very disturbing issue which made it so that pures were rare, if you are marked and get married but your partner ends up not being your 'fated pair', the probability of giving birth to a pure drops to 30%, you would give birth to children with ancient genes but their bloodline won't be pure and these set of people without pure bloodlines were called the semi/demi ancients.
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    I love this already.

    This genes metamorphoses a person body to become a specific gender which was divided into three parts- Alpha, Omega and Beta.
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
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    She’s a whole mood.

    "Fine" dina said
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Not anymore 😂

    "Em...….? Where are you? Are you in my mind? Wait! I have my privacies okay?!"
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  • histo_shizuka
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    Ch 7  Chapter Four- Take care of me acquaintance!
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    I think his personality is perfect for her.

    "Miss. Dina can you please stop pinching me?" zero said with a small smile
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    I think she’ll forget about Jack soon enough 🤣

    "Is that so?" Zero-one said with a gorgeous smile making the whole place lit up, he was beautiful, dina's heart was thumping so loudly that her whole ear was filled with its rhythm, she even momentarily forgot about jack.
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Oh, the dilemma!

    Her hands moved over her body, not knowing what to cover, her boobs? Or her bulge?
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Quality eye candy is the best.

    Weirdly, she wasn't disappointed, No! not weirdly, she wasn't disappointed because even though the gods had not sent her jack, they sent her a quality eye candy.
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    An interesting concept! If you have time, I would go back and edit some basic grammar such as punctuation and name capitalization. Small things like that will help keep readers. :)

    Ch 6  Chapter Three- I Geraldina Veraldina REJECTS!
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    Wow, dude.

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  • histo_shizuka
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  • histo_shizuka
    histo_shizuka1yr
    Commented

    I disagree 😂

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