Lazareth
This story is not your average story. The mc isn't your typical mc. He can be cowardly in some situations. I am writing this story about growth. Not only does the mc get stronger physically but mentally too. If you looking for an mc who is perfect from the get-go. Then this is not the novel for you. Web novel is big with a lot of great novels with perfect mcs. I'd encourage you to read that and not to read this. But if you do read and still your review says. Coward mc but nothing else. Then I am going to take that as a compliment because it's an intentional flaw. Please like this so people can see this first.
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I liked the characters of this story. but i didn't really get your jokes. moreover, you've to reduce repeated events. otherwise, the style u right is too difficult so i guess that time and the difficulty was the reason you repeated such sentence. I look forward that you will use more lightning in next chapter.
Love the story so far. Been enjoying it. Stable updates and if a day is missed a double is released the next day.I love the concept of the world and how you have used science to explain certain things. It makes it a lot more realistic. The MC seems to have a plan and follows, there is always a logical reason for his each and every action. Smart Mc and smart Author. There are often some grammar issues but it is not off putting. I believe in the potential of this story and I'm just here to voice(write) my appreciation. Please continue to write don't ever lose hope. Ps: I added this book to my library if that wasn't already implied.