Review Detail of Frame in Black God of Lightning (Revision pending)

Lovely! I can't get enough this. Although it started slow. The pacing is good. The character's feel real. Especially Lucas. I love how you have portrayed him. It's very real and authentic. Especially the way you write his inner dialogue. As a fan of lightning I'm hoping to see that soon but I'm loving your story. Please don't drop this precious work of art. And to those that are reading this. If you were hoping to gain some type of spoiler. I'm sorry but you going to have to read it yourself. Sorry not sorry. As you will love it😂😁. Youfan out (If you read the novel you will understand what this means)