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Review Detail of Kurosis in Black God of Lightning (Revision pending)

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Kurosis
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everything is great the writing the release rates...the only problem....is the story and mc(complete and utter coward. even system calls him one). Unfortunately i cant see this ever becoming popular. rated 3.4* Ty for writing this and if u enjoy writing this keep going =)

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Black God of Lightning (Revision pending)

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When people get transmigrated to another world. Their personality and the issues they dealt with before doesn't magically disappear. Yes, the mc does shy away from certain things. And it can be seen as cowardice. He isn't a complete coward only when it comes to love or romantical relationships will he run away. But I am trying to develop the mc's character where he learns to grow. If that approach isn't for you then all good. Oh and on the system calling him a coward. As the author, I am the system. As well all the characters. So if the system is calling the mc a coward. Doesn't that mean that I as the author recognize his flaw? That in fact, it's an intentional flaw...? But thank you for your fair review. And for taking the time to read my story. Hope you find something else on this site you can invest in and enjoy. Good luck:).